Lesson 12 · Complete Study Guide

Four Laws of Ecology (Part II)

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原文作者:Barry Commoner

课文逐句精读

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本段完整参考译文根据我的经验,这条规律会遭到强烈反对,因为它似乎与一种根深蒂固的观念相矛盾,这种观念认为,人类具有超凡的 能力。现代技术最普遍流行的特征之一就是,它旨在“改造自然”——提供粮食、衣物、住处以及各种交通和交流手段,这 些东西比起人类在自然中可获得的要好得多。直截了当地说,生态学的第三条规律认为,自然系统里任何人为的重大改变 都可能对生态系统产生破坏作用。虽然这种观点有点极端,但是我认为,如果从一个特定的适当语境去理解,它将对我们 很有价值。
段落完整解析

段落主旨与篇章作用

主旨:根据我的经验,这条规律会遭到强烈反对,因为它似乎与一种根深蒂固的观念相矛盾,这种观念认为,人类具有超凡的 能力。

作用:开篇建立《Four Laws of Ecology (Part II)》的叙述或论证起点,交代核心对象,并为下文展开设定观察角度。

行文结构与逻辑

先写“根据我的经验,这条规律会遭到强烈反对,因为它似乎与一种根深蒂固的观念相矛盾,这种观念认为,人类具有超凡的 能力。”;中部推进到“直截了当地说,生态学的第三条规律认为,自然系统里任何人为的重大改变 都可能对生态系统产生破坏作用。”;最后落在“虽然这种观点有点极端,但是我认为,如果从一个特定的适当语境去理解,它将对我们 很有价值。”,构成起点—展开—落点的层次。

主要关系:转折/对照、条件/选择、并列/递进

核心句法

One of the most pervasive features of modern technology is the notion that it is intended to “improve on nature’—to provide food, clothing, shelter, and means of communication and expression which are superior to those available to man in nature.

句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that, which,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词;逗号后有现在分词/完成分词短语,通常作伴随、原因或结果状语;分号或破折号连接/补充多个信息层次,阅读时先拆分主干再处理插入说明。

  • 关系或连接标记为 that、which;应逐一确认先行词,避免把定语从句误作新的主句。
  • 逗号后的 -ing / having done 成分不另立限定谓语,通常补充伴随、原因或结果。
  • be + 过去分词结构需结合施事与受事判断:是真正被动,还是已经形容词化的状态表达。
  • 分号或破折号划分较大的意义层次:先分别找各层主干,再判断并列、转折或补充关系。

词汇与短语

  • pervasive/pɚˈveɪsɪv/到处存在的,到处弥漫着的
  • detrimental/ˌdɛtrəˈmɛntəl/有害的,不利的
  • man-made/ˈmæn ˌmeɪd/人造的

修辞手法、原文证据与效果

  • Plain Exposition · 平实说明本段主要依靠叙述或逻辑说明推进,没有足以独立判定的显性修辞格;表达效果来自事实顺序和语义衔接。

翻译与理解难点

  • 长句先找限定谓语,再把定语从句、状语、同位语和插入语逐层拆开;中文可按逻辑顺序分译。
  • 破折号或分号承担补充、转折或并列分层,翻译时要保留层次而不必机械照搬标点。
  • 代词和关系词必须回指到明确对象;先确认先行词,再决定中文是否需要补出名词。
  • 被动结构应根据中文习惯处理为主动、无主句或“被”字句,重点保留施受关系。

Sentence 1.1In my experience this principle is likely to encounter considerable resistance, for it appears to contradict a deeply held idea about the unique competence of human beings.

对应译文根据我的经验,这条规律会遭到强烈反对,因为它似乎与一种根深蒂固的观念相矛盾,这种观念认为,人类具有超凡的 能力。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点In my experience this principle is likely to encounter considerable resistance, for it appears to contradict a deeply held idea ab…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 1.2One of the most pervasive features of modern technology is the notion that it is intended to “improve on nature’—to provide food, clothing, shelter, and means of communication and expression which are superior to those available to man in nature.

对应译文现代技术最普遍流行的特征之一就是,它旨在“改造自然”——提供粮食、衣物、住处以及各种交通和交流手段,这 些东西比起人类在自然中可获得的要好得多。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that, which,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词;逗号后有现在分词/完成分词短语,通常作伴随、原因或结果状语;分号或破折号连接/补充多个信息层次,阅读时先拆分主干再处理插入说明。
pervasive/pɚˈveɪsɪv/到处存在的,到处弥漫着的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点One of the most pervasive features of modern technology is the notion that it is intended to “improve on nature’—to provide food, …
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 1.3Stated baldly, the third law of ecology holds that any major man-made change in a natural system is likely to be detrimental to that system.

对应译文直截了当地说,生态学的第三条规律认为,自然系统里任何人为的重大改变 都可能对生态系统产生破坏作用。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
detrimental/ˌdɛtrəˈmɛntəl/有害的,不利的man-made/ˈmæn ˌmeɪd/人造的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点Stated baldly, the third law of ecology holds that any major man-made change in a natural system is likely to be detrimental to th…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 1.4This is a rather extreme claim; nevertheless I believe it has a good deal of merit if understood in a properly defined context.

对应译文虽然这种观点有点极端,但是我认为,如果从一个特定的适当语境去理解,它将对我们 很有价值。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含从属连词 if,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;分号或破折号连接/补充多个信息层次,阅读时先拆分主干再处理插入说明。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点This is a rather extreme claim; nevertheless I believe it has a good deal of merit if understood in a properly defined context.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。
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本段完整参考译文我发现,用类比的方法来解释这个原则很有用。假定你打开你的表盖,闭上眼,然后把一支铅笔插进裸露的机件中。几 乎可以肯定,这只手表被弄坏了,但是也并非绝对如此。有可能这只手表本来就没有被校正,而铅笔的随意插入碰巧使它 得到了所需要的精准校正。然而,这种结果太不可能了。问题的重点在于:为什么?答案不言而喻:手表的制造投入了大 量现代技术人员称之为“研究和开发”的工作(或者更通俗地说,“研发”)。这就意味着,数年来,经过师傅调教的无数制 表匠已经对手表机件的构成进行了大量各种各样的详细试验,抛弃了那些不能与这个系统的整体运作相适应的部分,而保 留了那些更好的特性。事实上,手表的装置已对大量的有可能被选用的零件进行了严格的筛选,才形成了现在的特有结 构。对这个手表进行任何随意的改变都有可能在很大程度上给手表的结构造成混乱和损害,并且,这些改变在过去的手表 制造过程中都被试验过,并且是被抛弃了的。因此可以说,作为手表业的一条规律,“手表制造者最了解情况”。
段落完整解析

段落主旨与篇章作用

主旨:我发现,用类比的方法来解释这个原则很有用。

作用:承接前文继续发展中心话题,通过事实、描写、解释或评价补充新的论证层次。

行文结构与逻辑

先写“我发现,用类比的方法来解释这个原则很有用。”;中部推进到“问题的重点在于:为什么?”;最后落在“因此可以说,作为手表业的一条规律,“手表制造者最了解情况”。”,构成起点—展开—落点的层次。

主要关系:转折/对照、并列/递进

核心句法

This means that over the years numerous watchmakers, each taught by a predecessor, have tried out a huge variety of detailed arrangements of watch works, have discarded those that are not compatible with the over-all operation of the system and retained the better features.

句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。

  • 关系或连接标记为 that;应逐一确认先行词,避免把定语从句误作新的主句。

词汇与短语

  • analogy/əˈnælədʒi/类似处,相似处
  • finite/ˈfaɪˌnaɪt/有限的,有限度的
  • improbable/ˌɪˈmprɑbəbəl/不大可能发生的,未必确切的
  • self-evident/ˈsɛlf ˌɛvədənt/不证自明的,显而易见的
  • predecessor/ˈprɛdəˌsɛsɚ/前任
  • over-all/ˈoʊvɚ ˌɔl/总体的;全面的
  • watch-making/ˈwɑtʃ ˌmeɪkɪŋ/钟表制造

修辞手法、原文证据与效果

  • Rhetorical Question · 反问/设问The question at issue is: why?以问句形式提出论点、质疑默认立场或引导下文,重点不在索取一个现场回答。把读者卷入推理过程,并加强语气或制造段落转折。
  • Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号research and development; R & D引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。
  • Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞all operation of the system and retained the better featur使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。
  • Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比In effect, the watch mechanism, as it now exists, represents a very restricted selection, from among an enormous variety of possible arrangements of component parts, of a singular …多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。
  • Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号the watchmaker knows best.引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。

翻译与理解难点

  • 长句先找限定谓语,再把定语从句、状语、同位语和插入语逐层拆开;中文可按逻辑顺序分译。
  • 代词和关系词必须回指到明确对象;先确认先行词,再决定中文是否需要补出名词。
  • 被动结构应根据中文习惯处理为主动、无主句或“被”字句,重点保留施受关系。

Sentence 2.1I have found it useful to explain this principle by means of an analogy.

对应译文我发现,用类比的方法来解释这个原则很有用。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
analogy/əˈnælədʒi/类似处,相似处
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点I have found it useful to explain this principle by means of an analogy.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 2.2Suppose you were to open the back of your watch, close your eyes, and poke a pencil into the exposed works.

对应译文我发现,用类比的方法来解释这个原则很有用。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点Suppose you were to open the back of your watch, close your eyes, and poke a pencil into the exposed works.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 2.3The almost certain result would be damage to the watch.

对应译文假定你打开你的表盖,闭上眼,然后把一支铅笔插进裸露的机件中。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点The almost certain result would be damage to the watch.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 2.4Nevertheless, this result is not absolutely certain.

对应译文几 乎可以肯定,这只手表被弄坏了,但是也并非绝对如此。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。句首限制/程度成分造成倒装或强调语序。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点Nevertheless, this result is not absolutely certain.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 2.5There is some finite possibility that the watch was out of adjustment and that the random thrust of the pencil happened to make the precise change needed to improve it.

对应译文有可能这只手表本来就没有被校正,而铅笔的随意插入碰巧使它 得到了所需要的精准校正。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。使用 there be 存现结构,真正信息焦点位于 be 之后;含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
finite/ˈfaɪˌnaɪt/有限的,有限度的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点There is some finite possibility that the watch was out of adjustment and that the random thrust of the pencil happened to make th…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 2.6However, this outcome is exceedingly improbable.

对应译文然而,这种结果太不可能了。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
improbable/ˌɪˈmprɑbəbəl/不大可能发生的,未必确切的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点However, this outcome is exceedingly improbable.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 2.7The question at issue is: why?

对应译文问题的重点在于:为什么?
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Rhetorical Question · 反问/设问
原文落点The question at issue is: why?
判定与构成以问句形式提出论点、质疑默认立场或引导下文,重点不在索取一个现场回答。
表达效果把读者卷入推理过程,并加强语气或制造段落转折。

Sentence 2.8The answer is self-evident: there is a very considerable amount of what technologists now call “research and development” (or, more familiarly, “R & D”) behind the watch.

对应译文答案不言而喻:手表的制造投入了大 量现代技术人员称之为“研究和开发”的工作(或者更通俗地说,“研发”)。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。使用 there be 存现结构,真正信息焦点位于 be 之后。
self-evident/ˈsɛlf ˌɛvədənt/不证自明的,显而易见的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号
原文落点research and development; R & D
判定与构成引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。
表达效果保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。

Sentence 2.9This means that over the years numerous watchmakers, each taught by a predecessor, have tried out a huge variety of detailed arrangements of watch works, have discarded those that are not compatible with the over-all operation of the system and retained the better features.

对应译文这就意味着,数年来,经过师傅调教的无数制 表匠已经对手表机件的构成进行了大量各种各样的详细试验,抛弃了那些不能与这个系统的整体运作相适应的部分,而保 留了那些更好的特性。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
predecessor/ˈprɛdəˌsɛsɚ/前任over-all/ˈoʊvɚ ˌɔl/总体的;全面的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞
原文落点all operation of the system and retained the better featur
判定与构成使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。
表达效果强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。

Sentence 2.10In effect, the watch mechanism, as it now exists, represents a very restricted selection, from among an enormous variety of possible arrangements of component parts, of a singular organization of the watch works.

对应译文事实上,手表的装置已对大量的有可能被选用的零件进行了严格的筛选,才形成了现在的特有结 构。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。多重逗号成分构成长句,注意并列项、插入语与主谓主干的边界。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比
原文落点In effect, the watch mechanism, as it now exists, represents a very restricted selection, from among an enormous variety of possible arrangements of component parts, of a singular …
判定与构成多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。
表达效果累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。

Sentence 2.11Any random change made in the watch is likely to fall into the very large class of inconsistent, or harmful, arrangements which have been tried out in past watch-making experience and discarded.

对应译文对这个手表进行任何随意的改变都有可能在很大程度上给手表的结构造成混乱和损害,并且,这些改变在过去的手表 制造过程中都被试验过,并且是被抛弃了的。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 which,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。
watch-making/ˈwɑtʃ ˌmeɪkɪŋ/钟表制造
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点Any random change made in the watch is likely to fall into the very large class of inconsistent, or harmful, arrangements which ha…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 2.12One might say, as a law of watches, that “the watchmaker knows best.”

对应译文因此可以说,作为手表业的一条规律,“手表制造者最了解情况”。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号
原文落点the watchmaker knows best.
判定与构成引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。
表达效果保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。
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本段完整参考译文生物系统中存在与手表制造非常接近、有深刻含义的类似情况。如果用一种物质,如X射线来处理某一生物,该生物体 内就有可能产生一系列无序的遗传变化,其遗传突变的频率也会增加。一般来说,虽然在自然界里这种情况不常发生,但 据观察,受X光照射会增加所有生物遗传突变的频率。因此,这些都可以被视为可能的变化。对我们的讨论很重要的是人 们普遍观察到,当遗传突变频率通过X射线照射或其他方式提高了时,几乎所有的遗传突变对有机体都有害,而且绝大多 数突变的破坏力都非常大,能在有机体完全形成之前把它毁灭。
段落完整解析

段落主旨与篇章作用

主旨:生物系统中存在与手表制造非常接近、有深刻含义的类似情况。

作用:承接前文继续发展中心话题,通过事实、描写、解释或评价补充新的论证层次。

行文结构与逻辑

先写“生物系统中存在与手表制造非常接近、有深刻含义的类似情况。”;中部推进到“一般来说,虽然在自然界里这种情况不常发生,但 据观察,受X光照射会增加所有生物遗传突变的频率。”;最后落在“对我们的讨论很重要的是人 们普遍观察到,当遗传突变频率通过X射线照射或其他方式提高了时,几乎所有的遗传突变对有机体都有害,而……”,构成起点—展开—落点的层次。

主要关系:因果、时间/次序、举例、并列/递进

核心句法

What is significant, for our purpose, is the universal observation that when mutation frequency is enhanced by x-rays or other means, nearly all the mutations are harmful to the organisms and the great majority so damaging as to kill the organism before it is fully formed.

句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;含从属连词 before, when,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。

  • 关系或连接标记为 that;应逐一确认先行词,避免把定语从句误作新的主句。
  • 从属标记为 before、when;它们分别组织让步、原因、时间、条件或选择关系。
  • be + 过去分词结构需结合施事与受事判断:是真正被动,还是已经形容词化的状态表达。

词汇与短语

  • analogy/əˈnælədʒi/类似处,相似处
  • induce/ˌɪˈndus/诱发(某种身体反应)
  • albeit/ɔˈlbiɪt/尽管,虽然
  • x-rays/ˈɛks ˌreɪz/X射线(复数)
  • mutation/mjuˈteɪʃən/动物或植物的)突变,变异

修辞手法、原文证据与效果

  • Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞all mutations which have been observed使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。
  • Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞all the mutations are harmful to the organisms and the gre使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。

翻译与理解难点

  • 长句先找限定谓语,再把定语从句、状语、同位语和插入语逐层拆开;中文可按逻辑顺序分译。
  • 代词和关系词必须回指到明确对象;先确认先行词,再决定中文是否需要补出名词。
  • 被动结构应根据中文习惯处理为主动、无主句或“被”字句,重点保留施受关系。

Sentence 3.1There is a close, and very meaningful, analogy in biological systems.

对应译文生物系统中存在与手表制造非常接近、有深刻含义的类似情况。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。使用 there be 存现结构,真正信息焦点位于 be 之后。
analogy/əˈnælədʒi/类似处,相似处
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点There is a close, and very meaningful, analogy in biological systems.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 3.2It is possible to induce a certain range of random, inherited changes in a living thing by treating it with an agent, such as x-irradiation, that increases the frequency of mutations.

对应译文如果用一种物质,如X射线来处理某一生物,该生物体 内就有可能产生一系列无序的遗传变化,其遗传突变的频率也会增加。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;有过去分词短语,通常表示被动或完成并作后置修饰/状语。
induce/ˌɪˈndus/诱发(某种身体反应)
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点It is possible to induce a certain range of random, inherited changes in a living thing by treating it with an agent, such as x-ir…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 3.3Generally, exposure to x-rays increases the frequency of all mutations which have been observed, albeit very infrequently, in nature and can therefore be regarded as possible changes.

对应译文一般来说,虽然在自然界里这种情况不常发生,但 据观察,受X光照射会增加所有生物遗传突变的频率。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 which,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。
albeit/ɔˈlbiɪt/尽管,虽然x-rays/ˈɛks ˌreɪz/X射线(复数)
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞
原文落点all mutations which have been observed
判定与构成使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。
表达效果强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。

Sentence 3.4What is significant, for our purpose, is the universal observation that when mutation frequency is enhanced by x-rays or other means, nearly all the mutations are harmful to the organisms and the great majority so damaging as to kill the organism before it is fully formed.

对应译文因此,这些都可以被视为可能的变化。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;含从属连词 before, when,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。
mutation/mjuˈteɪʃən/动物或植物的)突变,变异x-rays/ˈɛks ˌreɪz/X射线(复数)
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞
原文落点all the mutations are harmful to the organisms and the gre
判定与构成使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。
表达效果强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。
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本段完整参考译文换句话说,与手表一样,如果一个活的生物体的组织被随意改变,那么可以几乎肯定地说,这个生物体会受到损害,而 不是得到改善。在这两个例子的解释是一样的——投入了大量的“研发”工作。实际上,每一种生物都经过大约二至三亿年 的“研发”。在此期间,无数新的生物个体出现了,在各种情况下提供了试验某种随机的基因变化是否适宜的机会。如果这 种变化破坏了有机体的独立生存能力,它就有可能在传给有机体后代之前,毁灭这个有机体。就这样,生物逐渐建立起一 个复杂的、各个部分相互协调的结构;那些可能与整体不和谐的构成,便会在长期的进化过程中被筛选淘汰掉。因此,现 有生物或者现有的自然生态系统的各种构成都经过了严格的筛选,淘汰了不利的部分,从这个意义上说,其组成部分都是 最佳的、优选的,而任何新加入的成分可能都不如现有的组成成分。
段落完整解析

段落主旨与篇章作用

主旨:换句话说,与手表一样,如果一个活的生物体的组织被随意改变,那么可以几乎肯定地说,这个生物体会受到损害,而 不是得到改善。

作用:承接前文继续发展中心话题,通过事实、描写、解释或评价补充新的论证层次。

行文结构与逻辑

先写“换句话说,与手表一样,如果一个活的生物体的组织被随意改变,那么可以几乎肯定地说,这个生物体会受到损害,而 不是得到改善。”;中部推进到“在此期间,无数新的生物个体出现了,在各种情况下提供了试验某种随机的基因变化是否适宜的机会。”;最后落在“因此,现 有生物或者现有的自然生态系统的各种构成都经过了严格的筛选,淘汰了不利的部分,从这个意义上说,其组成部分都是 最佳的……”,构成起点—展开—落点的层次。

主要关系:因果、条件/选择、时间/次序、并列/递进

核心句法

Thus, the structure of a present living thing or the organization of a current natural ecosystem is likely to be “best” in the sense that it has been so heavily screened for disadvantageous components that any new one is very likely to be worse than the present ones.

句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。

  • 关系或连接标记为 that;应逐一确认先行词,避免把定语从句误作新的主句。

词汇与短语

  • viability/vaɪəˈbɪləti/成活力,生存能力

修辞手法、原文证据与效果

  • Simile · 明喻like the watch以 like 或 as...as 明示两个对象之间的相似性。把抽象判断转化为具体形象,帮助读者迅速把握特征。
  • Analogy · 类比like the watch, a living organism that is forced to sustain a random change in its organization is almost certain to be damaged rather than impr把结构复杂的生态、技术或文化问题与读者更熟悉的钟表、建筑或汽车系统作整体对应。借已知关系说明未知关系,使抽象论证更容易检验和理解。
  • Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号R & D.引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。
  • Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞every living thing使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。
  • Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号R & D引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。
  • Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号best引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。

翻译与理解难点

  • 长句先找限定谓语,再把定语从句、状语、同位语和插入语逐层拆开;中文可按逻辑顺序分译。
  • 破折号或分号承担补充、转折或并列分层,翻译时要保留层次而不必机械照搬标点。
  • 代词和关系词必须回指到明确对象;先确认先行词,再决定中文是否需要补出名词。
  • 被动结构应根据中文习惯处理为主动、无主句或“被”字句,重点保留施受关系。

Sentence 4.1In other words, like the watch, a living organism that is forced to sustain a random change in its organization is almost certain to be damaged rather than improved.

对应译文换句话说,与手表一样,如果一个活的生物体的组织被随意改变,那么可以几乎肯定地说,这个生物体会受到损害,而 不是得到改善。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Simile · 明喻
原文落点like the watch
判定与构成以 like 或 as...as 明示两个对象之间的相似性。
表达效果把抽象判断转化为具体形象,帮助读者迅速把握特征。
Analogy · 类比
原文落点like the watch, a living organism that is forced to sustain a random change in its organization is almost certain to be damaged rather than impr
判定与构成把结构复杂的生态、技术或文化问题与读者更熟悉的钟表、建筑或汽车系统作整体对应。
表达效果借已知关系说明未知关系,使抽象论证更容易检验和理解。

Sentence 4.2And in both cases, the explanation is the same—a great deal of “R & D.”

对应译文在这两个例子的解释是一样的——投入了大量的“研发”工作。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。分号或破折号连接/补充多个信息层次,阅读时先拆分主干再处理插入说明。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号
原文落点R & D.
判定与构成引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。
表达效果保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。

Sentence 4.3In effect there are some two to three billion years of “R & D” behind every living thing.

对应译文实际上,每一种生物都经过大约二至三亿年 的“研发”。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。使用 there be 存现结构,真正信息焦点位于 be 之后。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞
原文落点every living thing
判定与构成使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。
表达效果强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。
Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号
原文落点R & D
判定与构成引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。
表达效果保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。

Sentence 4.4In that time, a staggering number of new individual living things have been produced, affording in each case the opportunity to try out the suitability of some random genetic change.

对应译文在此期间,无数新的生物个体出现了,在各种情况下提供了试验某种随机的基因变化是否适宜的机会。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词;逗号后有现在分词/完成分词短语,通常作伴随、原因或结果状语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点In that time, a staggering number of new individual living things have been produced, affording in each case the opportunity to tr…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 4.5If the change damages the viability of the organism, it is likely to kill it before the change can be passed on to future generations.

对应译文如果这 种变化破坏了有机体的独立生存能力,它就有可能在传给有机体后代之前,毁灭这个有机体。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含从属连词 before, if,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。
viability/vaɪəˈbɪləti/成活力,生存能力
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点If the change damages the viability of the organism, it is likely to kill it before the change can be passed on to future generati…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 4.6In this way, living things accumulate a complex organization of compatible parts; those possible arrangements that are not compatible with the whole are screened out over the long course of evolution.

对应译文就这样,生物逐渐建立起一 个复杂的、各个部分相互协调的结构;那些可能与整体不和谐的构成,便会在长期的进化过程中被筛选淘汰掉。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词;逗号后有现在分词/完成分词短语,通常作伴随、原因或结果状语;分号或破折号连接/补充多个信息层次,阅读时先拆分主干再处理插入说明。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点In this way, living things accumulate a complex organization of compatible parts; those possible arrangements that are not compati…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 4.7Thus, the structure of a present living thing or the organization of a current natural ecosystem is likely to be “best” in the sense that it has been so heavily screened for disadvantageous components that any new one is very likely to be worse than the present ones.

对应译文因此,现 有生物或者现有的自然生态系统的各种构成都经过了严格的筛选,淘汰了不利的部分,从这个意义上说,其组成部分都是 最佳的、优选的,而任何新加入的成分可能都不如现有的组成成分。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号
原文落点best
判定与构成引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。
表达效果保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。
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本段完整参考译文这个原则与有机化学领域尤其相关。生物是由成千上万种不同的有机化合物构成的,有时人们设想,如果用一些人工制 造的天然物质的变体来替代它们,至少这些生物中的一些或许能得到改善。生态学的第三条规律意味着,人为引入不是自 然界产生的,而是人工制造的有机化合物,并且任其活跃于一种生物系统中,这一做法很有可能是有害的。
段落完整解析

段落主旨与篇章作用

主旨:这个原则与有机化学领域尤其相关。

作用:承接前文继续发展中心话题,通过事实、描写、解释或评价补充新的论证层次。

行文结构与逻辑

先写“这个原则与有机化学领域尤其相关。”;中部推进到“生物是由成千上万种不同的有机化合物构成的,有时人们设想,如果用一些人工制 造的天然物质的变体来替代它们,至少这些生物中的一些……”;最后落在“生态学的第三条规律意味着,人为引入不是自 然界产生的,而是人工制造的有机化合物,并且任其活跃于一种生物系统中,这一做法很有可……”,构成起点—展开—落点的层次。

主要关系:转折/对照、条件/选择、并列/递进

核心句法

Living things are composed of many thousands of different organic compounds, and it is sometimes imagined that at least some of these might be improved upon if they were replaced by some man-made variant of the natural substance.

句型:复合句/复杂句。含 It is/was ... that/who 强调结构;含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;含从属连词 if,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。

  • 关系或连接标记为 that;应逐一确认先行词,避免把定语从句误作新的主句。
  • 从属标记为 if;它们分别组织让步、原因、时间、条件或选择关系。
  • be + 过去分词结构需结合施事与受事判断:是真正被动,还是已经形容词化的状态表达。

词汇与短语

  • variant/ˈvɛriənt/变体,变化形式
  • man-made/ˈmæn ˌmeɪd/人造的
  • compound/ˈkɑmpaʊnd/化合物

修辞手法、原文证据与效果

  • Antithesis · 对照The third law of ecology suggests that the artificial introduction of an organic compound that does not occur in nature, but is man-made and is nevertheless active in a living syst…以 but 等转折标记把方向相反的判断置于相近结构中。突出矛盾、反转或价值冲突,使论点更鲜明。

翻译与理解难点

  • 长句先找限定谓语,再把定语从句、状语、同位语和插入语逐层拆开;中文可按逻辑顺序分译。
  • 代词和关系词必须回指到明确对象;先确认先行词,再决定中文是否需要补出名词。
  • 被动结构应根据中文习惯处理为主动、无主句或“被”字句,重点保留施受关系。

Sentence 5.1This principle is particularly relevant to the field of organic chemistry.

对应译文这个原则与有机化学领域尤其相关。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点This principle is particularly relevant to the field of organic chemistry.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 5.2Living things are composed of many thousands of different organic compounds, and it is sometimes imagined that at least some of these might be improved upon if they were replaced by some man-made variant of the natural substance.

对应译文生物是由成千上万种不同的有机化合物构成的,有时人们设想,如果用一些人工制 造的天然物质的变体来替代它们,至少这些生物中的一些或许能得到改善。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含 It is/was ... that/who 强调结构;含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;含从属连词 if,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。
variant/ˈvɛriənt/变体,变化形式man-made/ˈmæn ˌmeɪd/人造的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点Living things are composed of many thousands of different organic compounds, and it is sometimes imagined that at least some of th…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 5.3The third law of ecology suggests that the artificial introduction of an organic compound that does not occur in nature, but is man-made and is nevertheless active in a living system, is very likely to be harmful.

对应译文生态学的第三条规律意味着,人为引入不是自 然界产生的,而是人工制造的有机化合物,并且任其活跃于一种生物系统中,这一做法很有可能是有害的。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
compound/ˈkɑmpaʊnd/化合物man-made/ˈmæn ˌmeɪd/人造的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Antithesis · 对照
原文落点The third law of ecology suggests that the artificial introduction of an organic compound that does not occur in nature, but is man-made and is nevertheless active in a living syst…
判定与构成以 but 等转折标记把方向相反的判断置于相近结构中。
表达效果突出矛盾、反转或价值冲突,使论点更鲜明。
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本段完整参考译文造成这种现象的原因在于,比起可能存在的化学物质种类,生物体中实际上发现种类要少得多。显然,有非常多的蛋白 质种类不是由活细胞制造的。综上所述,人们可能会推断,许多可能存在的蛋白质种类曾经在一些特定的生物里形成,被 发现有害后又在进化的试验中被淘汰掉。同样,活细胞会合成具有偶数个碳链的脂肪酸(一种含有不同长度的碳链的有机 分子),而不合成含有奇数个碳链的脂肪酸。这就意味着,后者曾经被试验过并被发现不符合要求。同样,含有氮和氧原 子的有机化合物,在生物中特别稀有。这就警告我们,人工引入这类物质是很危险的。情况确实如此,因为这类物质通常 都是有毒的,而且常常致癌。此外,根据在自然界里无法找到DDT这一事实,我认为,在过去的某个地方某个时期,某个 不幸的细胞合成了这个分子,并且死亡了。
段落完整解析

段落主旨与篇章作用

主旨:造成这种现象的原因在于,比起可能存在的化学物质种类,生物体中实际上发现种类要少得多。

作用:承接前文继续发展中心话题,通过事实、描写、解释或评价补充新的论证层次。

行文结构与逻辑

先写“造成这种现象的原因在于,比起可能存在的化学物质种类,生物体中实际上发现种类要少得多。”;中部推进到“这就意味着,后者曾经被试验过并被发现不符合要求。”;最后落在“此外,根据在自然界里无法找到DDT这一事实,我认为,在过去的某个地方某个时期,某个 不幸的细胞合成了这个分子,并且死亡了。”,构成起点—展开—落点的层次。

主要关系:转折/对照、并列/递进

核心句法

In the same way, living cells synthesize fatty acids (a type of organic molecule that contains carbon chains of various lengths) with even-numbered carbon chain lengths (i.e., 4, 6, 8, etc., carbons), but no fatty acids with odd-numbered carbon chain lengths.

句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;逗号后有现在分词/完成分词短语,通常作伴随、原因或结果状语;多重逗号成分构成长句,注意并列项、插入语与主谓主干的边界。

  • 关系或连接标记为 that;应逐一确认先行词,避免把定语从句误作新的主句。
  • 逗号后的 -ing / having done 成分不另立限定谓语,通常补充伴随、原因或结果。
  • 本句包含多层逗号成分;括出插入语和并列项后,剩余部分即为主要主谓骨架。

词汇与短语

  • foregoing/fɔˈrɡoʊɪŋ/刚提到的(事物)前面提到的事
  • synthesize/ˈsɪnθəˌsaɪz/合成
  • even-numbered/ˈivɪn ˌnʌmbɚd/偶数编号的
  • odd-numbered/ˈɑd ˌnʌmbɚd/奇数编号的
  • carcinogenic/ˌkɑrsənoʊˈdʒɛnɪk/会致癌的

修辞手法、原文证据与效果

  • Litotes / Negative Emphasis · 曲言/否定强调In the same way, living cells synthesize fatty acids (a type of organic molecule that contains carbo通过否定、双重否定或弱化措辞表达强烈判断。语气比直接断言更克制,却能产生反向强化。
  • Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比In the same way, living cells synthesize fatty acids (a type of organic molecule that contains carbon chains of various lengths) with even-numbered carbon chain lengths (i.e., 4, 6…多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。
  • Antithesis · 对照In the same way, living cells synthesize fatty acids (a type of organic molecule that contains carbon chains of various lengths) with even-numbered carbon chain lengths (i.e., 4, 6…以 but 等转折标记把方向相反的判断置于相近结构中。突出矛盾、反转或价值冲突,使论点更鲜明。
  • Repetition · 反复carbon, lengths关键词在同一句中有意多次出现,形成语义回环或结构支点。持续锁定中心概念,使论述具有强调和节奏推进作用。
  • Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比And, I would suppose from the fact that DDT is nowhere found in nature, that somewhere, at some time in the past, some unfortunate cell synthesized this molecule—and died.多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。

翻译与理解难点

  • 长句先找限定谓语,再把定语从句、状语、同位语和插入语逐层拆开;中文可按逻辑顺序分译。
  • 破折号或分号承担补充、转折或并列分层,翻译时要保留层次而不必机械照搬标点。
  • 代词和关系词必须回指到明确对象;先确认先行词,再决定中文是否需要补出名词。
  • 被动结构应根据中文习惯处理为主动、无主句或“被”字句,重点保留施受关系。

Sentence 6.1This is due to the fact the varieties of chemical substances actually found in living things are vastly more restricted than the possible varieties.

对应译文造成这种现象的原因在于,比起可能存在的化学物质种类,生物体中实际上发现种类要少得多。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点This is due to the fact the varieties of chemical substances actually found in living things are vastly more restricted than the p…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 6.2Obviously there are a fantastically large number of protein types that are not made by living cells.

对应译文显然,有非常多的蛋白 质种类不是由活细胞制造的。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。使用 there be 存现结构,真正信息焦点位于 be 之后;含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点Obviously there are a fantastically large number of protein types that are not made by living cells.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 6.3And on the basis of the foregoing, one would reason that many of these possible protein types were once formed in some particular living things, found to be harmful, and rejected through the death of the experiment.

对应译文综上所述,人们可能会推断,许多可能存在的蛋白质种类曾经在一些特定的生物里形成,被 发现有害后又在进化的试验中被淘汰掉。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
foregoing/fɔˈrɡoʊɪŋ/刚提到的(事物)前面提到的事
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点And on the basis of the foregoing, one would reason that many of these possible protein types were once formed in some particular …
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 6.4In the same way, living cells synthesize fatty acids (a type of organic molecule that contains carbon chains of various lengths) with even-numbered carbon chain lengths (i.e., 4, 6, 8, etc., carbons), but no fatty acids with odd-numbered carbon chain lengths.

对应译文同样,活细胞会合成具有偶数个碳链的脂肪酸(一种含有不同长度的碳链的有机 分子),而不合成含有奇数个碳链的脂肪酸。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;逗号后有现在分词/完成分词短语,通常作伴随、原因或结果状语;多重逗号成分构成长句,注意并列项、插入语与主谓主干的边界。
synthesize/ˈsɪnθəˌsaɪz/合成even-numbered/ˈivɪn ˌnʌmbɚd/偶数编号的odd-numbered/ˈɑd ˌnʌmbɚd/奇数编号的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Litotes / Negative Emphasis · 曲言/否定强调
原文落点In the same way, living cells synthesize fatty acids (a type of organic molecule that contains carbo
判定与构成通过否定、双重否定或弱化措辞表达强烈判断。
表达效果语气比直接断言更克制,却能产生反向强化。
Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比
原文落点In the same way, living cells synthesize fatty acids (a type of organic molecule that contains carbon chains of various lengths) with even-numbered carbon chain lengths (i.e., 4, 6…
判定与构成多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。
表达效果累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。
Antithesis · 对照
原文落点In the same way, living cells synthesize fatty acids (a type of organic molecule that contains carbon chains of various lengths) with even-numbered carbon chain lengths (i.e., 4, 6…
判定与构成以 but 等转折标记把方向相反的判断置于相近结构中。
表达效果突出矛盾、反转或价值冲突,使论点更鲜明。
Repetition · 反复
原文落点carbon, lengths
判定与构成关键词在同一句中有意多次出现,形成语义回环或结构支点。
表达效果持续锁定中心概念,使论述具有强调和节奏推进作用。

Sentence 6.5This suggests that the latter have once been tried out and found wanting.

对应译文这就意味着,后者曾经被试验过并被发现不符合要求。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点This suggests that the latter have once been tried out and found wanting.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 6.6Similarly, organic compounds that contain attached nitrogen and oxygen atoms are singularly rare in living things.

对应译文同样,含有氮和氧原 子的有机化合物,在生物中特别稀有。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点Similarly, organic compounds that contain attached nitrogen and oxygen atoms are singularly rare in living things.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 6.7This should warn us that the artificial introduction of substances of this type would be dangerous.

对应译文这就警告我们,人工引入这类物质是很危险的。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点This should warn us that the artificial introduction of substances of this type would be dangerous.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 6.8This is indeed the case, for such substances are usually toxic and frequently carcinogenic.

对应译文情况确实如此,因为这类物质通常 都是有毒的,而且常常致癌。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。
carcinogenic/ˌkɑrsənoʊˈdʒɛnɪk/会致癌的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点This is indeed the case, for such substances are usually toxic and frequently carcinogenic.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 6.9And, I would suppose from the fact that DDT is nowhere found in nature, that somewhere, at some time in the past, some unfortunate cell synthesized this molecule—and died.

对应译文此外,根据在自然界里无法找到DDT这一事实,我认为,在过去的某个地方某个时期,某个 不幸的细胞合成了这个分子,并且死亡了。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;分号或破折号连接/补充多个信息层次,阅读时先拆分主干再处理插入说明;多重逗号成分构成长句,注意并列项、插入语与主谓主干的边界。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比
原文落点And, I would suppose from the fact that DDT is nowhere found in nature, that somewhere, at some time in the past, some unfortunate cell synthesized this molecule—and died.
判定与构成多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。
表达效果累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。
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本段完整参考译文一个生物有机体产生一种有机物质时,在自然界某处一定存在一种能够分解那种物质的酶,这是自然生态系统化学反应 的一个事实。实际上,有机物质如不能降解就不可能合成,再循环也因降解而得到强化。因此,当一种新的人造有机物质 被合成后,如果它的分子结构与自然界中存在的有机物质的分子结构大相径庭时,很有可能不存在降解这种物质的酶,这 种物质往往就会累积起来。
段落完整解析

段落主旨与篇章作用

主旨:一个生物有机体产生一种有机物质时,在自然界某处一定存在一种能够分解那种物质的酶,这是自然生态系统化学反应 的一个事实。

作用:承接前文继续发展中心话题,通过事实、描写、解释或评价补充新的论证层次。

行文结构与逻辑

先写“一个生物有机体产生一种有机物质时,在自然界某处一定存在一种能够分解那种物质的酶,这是自然生态系统化学反应 的一个事实。”;中部推进到“实际上,有机物质如不能降解就不可能合成,再循环也因降解而得到强化。”;最后落在“因此,当一种新的人造有机物质 被合成后,如果它的分子结构与自然界中存在的有机物质的分子结构大相径庭时,很有可能不存在降解这种……”,构成起点—展开—落点的层次。

主要关系:因果、条件/选择、时间/次序、并列/递进

核心句法

Thus, when a new man-made organic substance is synthesized with a molecular structure that departs significantly from the types which occur in nature, it is probable that no degradative enzyme exists, and the material tends to accumulate.

句型:复合句/复杂句。含 It is/was ... that/who 强调结构;含关系或连接成分 that, which,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;含从属连词 when,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词;有过去分词短语,通常表示被动或完成并作后置修饰/状语。

  • 关系或连接标记为 that、which;应逐一确认先行词,避免把定语从句误作新的主句。
  • 从属标记为 when;它们分别组织让步、原因、时间、条件或选择关系。
  • be + 过去分词结构需结合施事与受事判断:是真正被动,还是已经形容词化的状态表达。

词汇与短语

  • enzyme/ˈɛˌnzaɪm/
  • provision/prəˈvɪʒən/提 供,供给,为……作好准备,为……预先釆取措施
  • man-made/ˈmæn ˌmeɪd/人造的

修辞手法、原文证据与效果

  • Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞every organic substance produced by a living organism使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。
  • Litotes / Negative Emphasis · 曲言/否定强调In effect, no organic substance is synthesized unless there is provision for its degradation; recycl通过否定、双重否定或弱化措辞表达强烈判断。语气比直接断言更克制,却能产生反向强化。
  • Litotes / Negative Emphasis · 曲言/否定强调Thus, when a new man-made organic substance is synthesized with a molecular structure that departs s通过否定、双重否定或弱化措辞表达强烈判断。语气比直接断言更克制,却能产生反向强化。

翻译与理解难点

  • 长句先找限定谓语,再把定语从句、状语、同位语和插入语逐层拆开;中文可按逻辑顺序分译。
  • 破折号或分号承担补充、转折或并列分层,翻译时要保留层次而不必机械照搬标点。
  • 代词和关系词必须回指到明确对象;先确认先行词,再决定中文是否需要补出名词。
  • 被动结构应根据中文习惯处理为主动、无主句或“被”字句,重点保留施受关系。

Sentence 7.1One of the striking facts about the chemistry of living systems is that-for every organic substance produced by a living organism, there exists, somewhere in nature, an enzyme capable of breaking that substance down.

对应译文一个生物有机体产生一种有机物质时,在自然界某处一定存在一种能够分解那种物质的酶,这是自然生态系统化学反应 的一个事实。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
enzyme/ˈɛˌnzaɪm/
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞
原文落点every organic substance produced by a living organism
判定与构成使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。
表达效果强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。

Sentence 7.2In effect, no organic substance is synthesized unless there is provision for its degradation; recycling is thus enforced.

对应译文实际上,有机物质如不能降解就不可能合成,再循环也因降解而得到强化。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。使用 there be 存现结构,真正信息焦点位于 be 之后;含从属连词 unless,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词;分号或破折号连接/补充多个信息层次,阅读时先拆分主干再处理插入说明。
provision/prəˈvɪʒən/提 供,供给,为……作好准备,为……预先釆取措施
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Litotes / Negative Emphasis · 曲言/否定强调
原文落点In effect, no organic substance is synthesized unless there is provision for its degradation; recycl
判定与构成通过否定、双重否定或弱化措辞表达强烈判断。
表达效果语气比直接断言更克制,却能产生反向强化。

Sentence 7.3Thus, when a new man-made organic substance is synthesized with a molecular structure that departs significantly from the types which occur in nature, it is probable that no degradative enzyme exists, and the material tends to accumulate.

对应译文因此,当一种新的人造有机物质 被合成后,如果它的分子结构与自然界中存在的有机物质的分子结构大相径庭时,很有可能不存在降解这种物质的酶,这 种物质往往就会累积起来。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含 It is/was ... that/who 强调结构;含关系或连接成分 that, which,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;含从属连词 when,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词;有过去分词短语,通常表示被动或完成并作后置修饰/状语。
enzyme/ˈɛˌnzaɪm/man-made/ˈmæn ˌmeɪd/人造的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Litotes / Negative Emphasis · 曲言/否定强调
原文落点Thus, when a new man-made organic substance is synthesized with a molecular structure that departs s
判定与构成通过否定、双重否定或弱化措辞表达强烈判断。
表达效果语气比直接断言更克制,却能产生反向强化。
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本段完整参考译文基于这些考虑,我认为,我们应该慎重对待每一种人工制造的、自然界没有的、对任何有机物有强烈作用的有机化学 物,将其看成对其他生命形式会产生潜在危险的物质。在实际操作层面,这个观点意味着小心谨慎对待所有人工制造的、 具有生物活性的有机化合物,就像对待药物一样。当亿万磅的物质被大量生产并被广泛地散布到生态系统中,对我们观察 不到的大量物质产生影响的时候,再慎重也为时已晚。而这正是我们对待洗涤剂、杀虫剂、除草剂的方式。由此而经常产 生的灾难性后果进一步论证了“自然最了解情况”这一论断。 生态学的第四条规律:没有免费的午餐
段落完整解析

段落主旨与篇章作用

主旨:基于这些考虑,我认为,我们应该慎重对待每一种人工制造的、自然界没有的、对任何有机物有强烈作用的有机化学 物,将其看成对其他生命形式会产生潜在危险的物质。

作用:承接前文继续发展中心话题,通过事实、描写、解释或评价补充新的论证层次。

行文结构与逻辑

先写“基于这些考虑,我认为,我们应该慎重对待每一种人工制造的、自然界没有的、对任何有机物有强烈作用的有机化学 物,将其看成对其他生……”;中部推进到“当亿万磅的物质被大量生产并被广泛地散布到生态系统中,对我们观察 不到的大量物质产生影响的时候,再慎重也为时已晚。”;最后落在“由此而经常产 生的灾难性后果进一步论证了“自然最了解情况”这一论断。 生态学的第四条规律:没有免费的午餐”,构成起点—展开—落点的层次。

主要关系:转折/对照、时间/次序、并列/递进

核心句法

Such caution or prudence is, of course, impossible when billions of pounds of the substance are produced and broadly disseminated into the ecosystem where it can reach and affect numerous organisms not under our observation.

句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 where,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;含从属连词 when,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。

  • 关系或连接标记为 where;应逐一确认先行词,避免把定语从句误作新的主句。
  • 从属标记为 when;它们分别组织让步、原因、时间、条件或选择关系。
  • be + 过去分词结构需结合施事与受事判断:是真正被动,还是已经形容词化的状态表达。

词汇与短语

  • prudent/ˈprudənt/明智谨慎的,慎重的,审慎的
  • man-made/ˈmæn ˌmeɪd/人造的

修辞手法、原文证据与效果

  • Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞every man-made organic chemical not found in nature which ha使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。
  • Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞all man-made organic compounds that are at all active biol使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。
  • Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比Such caution or prudence is, of course, impossible when billions of pounds of the substance are produced and broadly disseminated into the ecosystem where it can reach and affect n…多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。
  • Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号Nature knows best.引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。

翻译与理解难点

  • 长句先找限定谓语,再把定语从句、状语、同位语和插入语逐层拆开;中文可按逻辑顺序分译。
  • 代词和关系词必须回指到明确对象;先确认先行词,再决定中文是否需要补出名词。
  • 被动结构应根据中文习惯处理为主动、无主句或“被”字句,重点保留施受关系。

Sentence 8.1Given these considerations, it would be prudent, I believe, to regard every man-made organic chemical not found in nature which has a strong action on any one organism as potentially dangerous to other forms of life.

对应译文基于这些考虑,我认为,我们应该慎重对待每一种人工制造的、自然界没有的、对任何有机物有强烈作用的有机化学 物,将其看成对其他生命形式会产生潜在危险的物质。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 which,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
prudent/ˈprudənt/明智谨慎的,慎重的,审慎的man-made/ˈmæn ˌmeɪd/人造的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞
原文落点every man-made organic chemical not found in nature which ha
判定与构成使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。
表达效果强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。

Sentence 8.2Operationally, this view means that all man-made organic compounds that are at all active biologically ought to be treated as we do drugs, or rather as we should treat them: prudently, cautiously.

对应译文在实际操作层面,这个观点意味着小心谨慎对待所有人工制造的、 具有生物活性的有机化合物,就像对待药物一样。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。
man-made/ˈmæn ˌmeɪd/人造的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞
原文落点all man-made organic compounds that are at all active biol
判定与构成使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。
表达效果强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。

Sentence 8.3Such caution or prudence is, of course, impossible when billions of pounds of the substance are produced and broadly disseminated into the ecosystem where it can reach and affect numerous organisms not under our observation.

对应译文当亿万磅的物质被大量生产并被广泛地散布到生态系统中,对我们观察 不到的大量物质产生影响的时候,再慎重也为时已晚。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 where,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;含从属连词 when,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比
原文落点Such caution or prudence is, of course, impossible when billions of pounds of the substance are produced and broadly disseminated into the ecosystem where it can reach and affect n…
判定与构成多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。
表达效果累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。

Sentence 8.4Yet this is precisely what we have done with detergents, insecticides, and herbicides.

对应译文而这正是我们对待洗涤剂、杀虫剂、除草剂的方式。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点Yet this is precisely what we have done with detergents, insecticides, and herbicides.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 8.5The often catastrophic results lend considerable force to the view that “Nature knows best.” et] Lies

对应译文由此而经常产 生的灾难性后果进一步论证了“自然最了解情况”这一论断。 生态学的第四条规律:没有免费的午餐
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号
原文落点Nature knows best.
判定与构成引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。
表达效果保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。
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本段完整参考译文根据我的经验,已经证明这一概念能够十分清晰地解释环境问题,因此我借用了这个原本属于经济学领域的概念。这 个“规律”源于一个为经济学家们所熟知的故事,说的是一位因石油致富的实业大王认定他创造新财富需要经济学来指导。 因此,他命令他的顾问们写出一套包含所有经济学智慧的多卷本书来,违者处死。当这部鸿篇巨著呈上来时,实业大王却 很不耐烦,又发出一道命令——把所有的经济学知识缩减成一个单行本。故事就顺着这样一条脉络发展下去,这类故事都 应这样的。如果他们还想活命的话,就得按照要求把整个经济学浓缩成一句话。这就是“免费午餐”规律的起源。
段落完整解析

段落主旨与篇章作用

主旨:根据我的经验,已经证明这一概念能够十分清晰地解释环境问题,因此我借用了这个原本属于经济学领域的概念。

作用:承接前文继续发展中心话题,通过事实、描写、解释或评价补充新的论证层次。

行文结构与逻辑

先写“根据我的经验,已经证明这一概念能够十分清晰地解释环境问题,因此我借用了这个原本属于经济学领域的概念。”;中部推进到“故事就顺着这样一条脉络发展下去,这类故事都 应这样的。”;最后落在“这就是“免费午餐”规律的起源。”,构成起点—展开—落点的层次。

主要关系:因果、条件/选择、时间/次序、并列/递进

核心句法

The story goes on in this vein, as such stories will, until the advisers are required, if they are to survive, to reduce the totality of economics science to a single sentence.

句型:复合句/复杂句。含从属连词 if,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词;多重逗号成分构成长句,注意并列项、插入语与主谓主干的边界。

  • 从属标记为 if;它们分别组织让步、原因、时间、条件或选择关系。
  • be + 过去分词结构需结合施事与受事判断:是真正被动,还是已经形容词化的状态表达。
  • 本句包含多层逗号成分;括出插入语和并列项后,剩余部分即为主要主谓骨架。

词汇与短语

  • illuminating/ˌɪˈluməˌneɪtɪŋ/使清楚易懂的,富于启发性的
  • potentate/ˈpoʊtəˌnteɪt/君主,统治者
  • oil-rich/ˈɔɪl ˌrɪtʃ/石油丰富的

修辞手法、原文证据与效果

  • Simile · 明喻like to tell about an oil-rich potentate who decided that his new wealth needed the guidance of以 like 或 as...as 明示两个对象之间的相似性。把抽象判断转化为具体形象,帮助读者迅速把握特征。
  • Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号law引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。
  • Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞all the wisdom of economics使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。
  • Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞all the knowledge of economics to a single volume使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。
  • Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比The story goes on in this vein, as such stories will, until the advisers are required, if they are to survive, to reduce the totality of economics science to a single sentence.多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。
  • Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号free lunch引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。

翻译与理解难点

  • 长句先找限定谓语,再把定语从句、状语、同位语和插入语逐层拆开;中文可按逻辑顺序分译。
  • 破折号或分号承担补充、转折或并列分层,翻译时要保留层次而不必机械照搬标点。
  • 代词和关系词必须回指到明确对象;先确认先行词,再决定中文是否需要补出名词。
  • 被动结构应根据中文习惯处理为主动、无主句或“被”字句,重点保留施受关系。

Sentence 9.1In my experience, this idea has proven so illuminating for environmental problems that I have borrowed it from its original source, economics.

对应译文根据我的经验,已经证明这一概念能够十分清晰地解释环境问题,因此我借用了这个原本属于经济学领域的概念。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
illuminating/ˌɪˈluməˌneɪtɪŋ/使清楚易懂的,富于启发性的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点In my experience, this idea has proven so illuminating for environmental problems that I have borrowed it from its original source…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 9.2The “law” derives from a story that economists like to tell about an oil-rich potentate who decided that his new wealth needed the guidance of economic science.

对应译文这 个“规律”源于一个为经济学家们所熟知的故事,说的是一位因石油致富的实业大王认定他创造新财富需要经济学来指导。 因此,他命令他的顾问们写出一套包含所有经济学智慧的多卷本书来,违者处死。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that, who,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
potentate/ˈpoʊtəˌnteɪt/君主,统治者oil-rich/ˈɔɪl ˌrɪtʃ/石油丰富的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Simile · 明喻
原文落点like to tell about an oil-rich potentate who decided that his new wealth needed the guidance of
判定与构成以 like 或 as...as 明示两个对象之间的相似性。
表达效果把抽象判断转化为具体形象,帮助读者迅速把握特征。
Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号
原文落点law
判定与构成引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。
表达效果保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。

Sentence 9.3Accordingly he ordered his advisers, on pain of death, to produce a set of volumes containing all the wisdom of economics.

对应译文当这部鸿篇巨著呈上来时,实业大王却 很不耐烦,又发出一道命令——把所有的经济学知识缩减成一个单行本。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞
原文落点all the wisdom of economics
判定与构成使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。
表达效果强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。

Sentence 9.4When the tomes arrived, the potentate was impatient and again issued an order—to reduce all the knowledge of economics to a single volume.

对应译文故事就顺着这样一条脉络发展下去,这类故事都 应这样的。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含从属连词 when,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;分号或破折号连接/补充多个信息层次,阅读时先拆分主干再处理插入说明。
potentate/ˈpoʊtəˌnteɪt/君主,统治者
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞
原文落点all the knowledge of economics to a single volume
判定与构成使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。
表达效果强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。

Sentence 9.5The story goes on in this vein, as such stories will, until the advisers are required, if they are to survive, to reduce the totality of economics science to a single sentence.

对应译文如果他们还想活命的话,就得按照要求把整个经济学浓缩成一句话。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含从属连词 if,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词;多重逗号成分构成长句,注意并列项、插入语与主谓主干的边界。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比
原文落点The story goes on in this vein, as such stories will, until the advisers are required, if they are to survive, to reduce the totality of economics science to a single sentence.
判定与构成多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。
表达效果累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。

Sentence 9.6This is the origin of the “free lunch” law.

对应译文这就是“免费午餐”规律的起源。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Quotation / Scare Quotes · 引语/讽刺引号
原文落点free lunch
判定与构成引号可能保存原话,也可能标示作者与流行标签、陈词滥调之间的距离。
表达效果保留时代声音,并提示读者不要毫无保留地接受被引说法。
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本段完整参考译文在生态学里,正如在经济学里一样,这一规律警示我们,有得必有失。从某种意义上说,最后这条规律包含了前三条 规律。因为全球的生态系统是一个互相连接的整体,在此系统中,没有所谓的得到或失去,对此系统不可进行全面的改 善,人类必须付出代价才能从生态系统中获取东西。代价的付出可以拖延但不能完全回避。当前的环境危机警告我们,对 自然应偿还的债务,我们已拖欠太久。
段落完整解析

段落主旨与篇章作用

主旨:在生态学里,正如在经济学里一样,这一规律警示我们,有得必有失。

作用:承接前文继续发展中心话题,通过事实、描写、解释或评价补充新的论证层次。

行文结构与逻辑

先写“在生态学里,正如在经济学里一样,这一规律警示我们,有得必有失。”;中部推进到“因为全球的生态系统是一个互相连接的整体,在此系统中,没有所谓的得到或失去,对此系统不可进行全面的改 善,人类必须付出代价才能……”;最后落在“当前的环境危机警告我们,对 自然应偿还的债务,我们已拖欠太久。”,构成起点—展开—落点的层次。

主要关系:因果、并列/递进

核心句法

Because the global ecosystem is a connected whole, in which nothing can be gained or lost and which is not subject to over-all improvement, anything extracted from it by human effort must be replaced.

句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 which,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;含从属连词 because,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词;逗号后有现在分词/完成分词短语,通常作伴随、原因或结果状语。

  • 关系或连接标记为 which;应逐一确认先行词,避免把定语从句误作新的主句。
  • 从属标记为 because;它们分别组织让步、原因、时间、条件或选择关系。
  • 逗号后的 -ing / having done 成分不另立限定谓语,通常补充伴随、原因或结果。
  • be + 过去分词结构需结合施事与受事判断:是真正被动,还是已经形容词化的状态表达。

词汇与短语

  • over-all/ˈoʊvɚ ˌɔl/总体的;全面的

修辞手法、原文证据与效果

  • Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞every gain is won at some cost使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。
  • Litotes / Negative Emphasis · 曲言/否定强调nothing can be gained or lost and which is not subject to over-all impro通过否定、双重否定或弱化措辞表达强烈判断。语气比直接断言更克制,却能产生反向强化。
  • Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞nothing can be gained or lost and which is not subject to over使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。

翻译与理解难点

  • 长句先找限定谓语,再把定语从句、状语、同位语和插入语逐层拆开;中文可按逻辑顺序分译。
  • 破折号或分号承担补充、转折或并列分层,翻译时要保留层次而不必机械照搬标点。
  • 代词和关系词必须回指到明确对象;先确认先行词,再决定中文是否需要补出名词。
  • 被动结构应根据中文习惯处理为主动、无主句或“被”字句,重点保留施受关系。

Sentence 10.1In ecology, as in economics, the law is intended to warn that every gain is won at some cost.

对应译文在生态学里,正如在经济学里一样,这一规律警示我们,有得必有失。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞
原文落点every gain is won at some cost
判定与构成使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。
表达效果强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。

Sentence 10.2In a way, this ecological law embodies the three previous laws.

对应译文从某种意义上说,最后这条规律包含了前三条 规律。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点In a way, this ecological law embodies the three previous laws.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 10.3Because the global ecosystem is a connected whole, in which nothing can be gained or lost and which is not subject to over-all improvement, anything extracted from it by human effort must be replaced.

对应译文因为全球的生态系统是一个互相连接的整体,在此系统中,没有所谓的得到或失去,对此系统不可进行全面的改 善,人类必须付出代价才能从生态系统中获取东西。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 which,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;含从属连词 because,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词;逗号后有现在分词/完成分词短语,通常作伴随、原因或结果状语。
over-all/ˈoʊvɚ ˌɔl/总体的;全面的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Litotes / Negative Emphasis · 曲言/否定强调
原文落点nothing can be gained or lost and which is not subject to over-all impro
判定与构成通过否定、双重否定或弱化措辞表达强烈判断。
表达效果语气比直接断言更克制,却能产生反向强化。
Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞
原文落点nothing can be gained or lost and which is not subject to over
判定与构成使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。
表达效果强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。

Sentence 10.4Payment of this price cannot be avoided; it can only be delayed.

对应译文代价的付出可以拖延但不能完全回避。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词;分号或破折号连接/补充多个信息层次,阅读时先拆分主干再处理插入说明。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点Payment of this price cannot be avoided; it can only be delayed.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。
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本段完整参考译文以上所述是对地球生命之网的看法。我已根据已有事实,运用逻辑学的种种关系,把这一看法发展成了一个综合的概 括性结论。换句话说,这种努力是科学的。
段落完整解析

段落主旨与篇章作用

主旨:以上所述是对地球生命之网的看法。

作用:承接前文继续发展中心话题,通过事实、描写、解释或评价补充新的论证层次。

行文结构与逻辑

先写“以上所述是对地球生命之网的看法。”;中部推进到“我已根据已有事实,运用逻辑学的种种关系,把这一看法发展成了一个综合的概 括性结论。”;最后落在“换句话说,这种努力是科学的。”,构成起点—展开—落点的层次。

主要关系:语义承接与信息递进

核心句法

The present environmental crisis is a warning that we have delayed nearly too long. il The preceding pages provide a view of the web of life on the earth.

句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。

  • 关系或连接标记为 that;应逐一确认先行词,避免把定语从句误作新的主句。

词汇与短语

  • 本段以常用词为主;重点应放在词语搭配、指代和上下文语义上。

修辞手法、原文证据与效果

  • Plain Exposition · 平实说明本段主要依靠叙述或逻辑说明推进,没有足以独立判定的显性修辞格;表达效果来自事实顺序和语义衔接。

翻译与理解难点

  • 代词和关系词必须回指到明确对象;先确认先行词,再决定中文是否需要补出名词。

Sentence 11.1The present environmental crisis is a warning that we have delayed nearly too long. il The preceding pages provide a view of the web of life on the earth.

对应译文以上所述是对地球生命之网的看法。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点The present environmental crisis is a warning that we have delayed nearly too long. il The preceding pages provide a view of the w…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 11.2An effort has been made to develop this view from available facts, through logical relations, into a set of comprehensive generalizations.

对应译文我已根据已有事实,运用逻辑学的种种关系,把这一看法发展成了一个综合的概 括性结论。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点An effort has been made to develop this view from available facts, through logical relations, into a set of comprehensive generali…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 11.3In other words, the effort has been scientific.

对应译文换句话说,这种努力是科学的。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点In other words, the effort has been scientific.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。
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本段完整参考译文然而,很难忽视一个令人难堪的事实,即从所有这些——生态学的四条规律——脱胎而来的最终的概括性结论是已经 被很多非科学研究领域的人们所广泛认可的理念。沃尔特·惠特曼的诗歌清晰地描述了所有生命都深陷其中的复杂之网以 及人类在其中的地位。可以从《白鲸》一书中了解到大量有关环境和生物的物理特性之间的相互作用的知识。马克·吐温 不仅对美国密西西比河以西的环境特征了如指掌,而且对科学与生活现实脱节的问题进行了相当尖锐的批评。正如批评家 利奥·马克斯提醒我们的那样:“任何熟悉美国经典作家(我想到的作家有:库珀、爱默生、梭罗、梅尔维尔、惠特曼以及 马克·吐温)作品的人,都可能曾对我们近来称之为生态学的东西感兴趣。”
段落完整解析

段落主旨与篇章作用

主旨:然而,很难忽视一个令人难堪的事实,即从所有这些——生态学的四条规律——脱胎而来的最终的概括性结论是已经 被很多非科学研究领域的人们所广泛认可的理念。

作用:承接前文并转折修正:先否定或限制上一层判断,再把论述推向新的方向。

行文结构与逻辑

先写“然而,很难忽视一个令人难堪的事实,即从所有这些——生态学的四条规律——脱胎而来的最终的概括性结论是已经 被很多非科学研究领域……”;中部推进到“可以从《白鲸》一书中了解到大量有关环境和生物的物理特性之间的相互作用的知识。”;最后落在“正如批评家 利奥·马克斯提醒我们的那样:“任何熟悉美国经典作家(我想到的作家有:库珀、爱默生、梭罗、梅尔维尔、惠特曼以及 马……”,构成起点—展开—落点的层次。

主要关系:转折/对照、并列/递进

核心句法

As the critic Leo Marx reminds us, “Anyone familiar with the work of the classic American writer (I am thinking of men like Cooper, Emerson, Thoreau, Melville, Whitman, and Mark Twain) is likely to have developed an interest in what we recently have learned to call ecology.”

句型:简单句或并列句。多重逗号成分构成长句,注意并列项、插入语与主谓主干的边界。

  • 本句包含多层逗号成分;括出插入语和并列项后,剩余部分即为主要主谓骨架。

词汇与短语

  • enmeshed/ɛˈnmɛʃt/陷入的,卷入的
  • incisive/ˌɪˈnsaɪsɪv/尖锐的,切中要害的

修辞手法、原文证据与效果

  • Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞all this—the four laws of ecology—are ideas that have been使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。
  • Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞all life is enmeshed使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。
  • Antithesis · 对照Mark Twain is not only a marvelous source of wisdom about the nature of the environment of the United States from the Mississippi westward, but also a rather incisive critic of the…以 but 等转折标记把方向相反的判断置于相近结构中。突出矛盾、反转或价值冲突,使论点更鲜明。
  • Simile · 明喻like Cooper以 like 或 as...as 明示两个对象之间的相似性。把抽象判断转化为具体形象,帮助读者迅速把握特征。
  • Metonymy · 借代minds以思维器官代知识分子或思想。用高度凝练的关联名称压缩复杂社会背景。
  • Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比As the critic Leo Marx reminds us, “Anyone familiar with the work of the classic American writer (I am thinking of men like Cooper, Emerson, Thoreau, Melville, Whitman, and Mark Tw…多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。

翻译与理解难点

  • 长句先找限定谓语,再把定语从句、状语、同位语和插入语逐层拆开;中文可按逻辑顺序分译。
  • 破折号或分号承担补充、转折或并列分层,翻译时要保留层次而不必机械照搬标点。
  • 代词和关系词必须回指到明确对象;先确认先行词,再决定中文是否需要补出名词。
  • 被动结构应根据中文习惯处理为主动、无主句或“被”字句,重点保留施受关系。

Sentence 12.1Nevertheless, it is difficult to ignore the embarrassing fact that the final generalizations which emerge from all this—the four laws of ecology—are ideas that have been widely held by many people without any scientific analysis or professional authorization.

对应译文然而,很难忽视一个令人难堪的事实,即从所有这些——生态学的四条规律——脱胎而来的最终的概括性结论是已经 被很多非科学研究领域的人们所广泛认可的理念。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。句首限制/程度成分造成倒装或强调语序;含 It is/was ... that/who 强调结构;含关系或连接成分 that, which,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;分号或破折号连接/补充多个信息层次,阅读时先拆分主干再处理插入说明。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞
原文落点all this—the four laws of ecology—are ideas that have been
判定与构成使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。
表达效果强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。

Sentence 12.2The complex web in which all life is enmeshed, and man’s place in it, are clearly—and beautifully—described in poems of Walt Whitman.

对应译文沃尔特·惠特曼的诗歌清晰地描述了所有生命都深陷其中的复杂之网以 及人类在其中的地位。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 which,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词;分号或破折号连接/补充多个信息层次,阅读时先拆分主干再处理插入说明。
enmeshed/ɛˈnmɛʃt/陷入的,卷入的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞
原文落点all life is enmeshed
判定与构成使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。
表达效果强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。

Sentence 12.3A great deal about the interplay of the physical features of the environment and the creatures that inhabit it can be learned from Moby Dick.

对应译文可以从《白鲸》一书中了解到大量有关环境和生物的物理特性之间的相互作用的知识。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点A great deal about the interplay of the physical features of the environment and the creatures that inhabit it can be learned from…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 12.4Mark Twain is not only a marvelous source of wisdom about the nature of the environment of the United States from the Mississippi westward, but also a rather incisive critic of the irrelevance of science which loses connection to the realities of life.

对应译文马克·吐温 不仅对美国密西西比河以西的环境特征了如指掌,而且对科学与生活现实脱节的问题进行了相当尖锐的批评。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 which,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
incisive/ˌɪˈnsaɪsɪv/尖锐的,切中要害的
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Antithesis · 对照
原文落点Mark Twain is not only a marvelous source of wisdom about the nature of the environment of the United States from the Mississippi westward, but also a rather incisive critic of the…
判定与构成以 but 等转折标记把方向相反的判断置于相近结构中。
表达效果突出矛盾、反转或价值冲突,使论点更鲜明。

Sentence 12.5As the critic Leo Marx reminds us, “Anyone familiar with the work of the classic American writer (I am thinking of men like Cooper, Emerson, Thoreau, Melville, Whitman, and Mark Twain) is likely to have developed an interest in what we recently have learned to call ecology.”

对应译文正如批评家 利奥·马克斯提醒我们的那样:“任何熟悉美国经典作家(我想到的作家有:库珀、爱默生、梭罗、梅尔维尔、惠特曼以及 马克·吐温)作品的人,都可能曾对我们近来称之为生态学的东西感兴趣。”
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。多重逗号成分构成长句,注意并列项、插入语与主谓主干的边界。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Simile · 明喻
原文落点like Cooper
判定与构成以 like 或 as...as 明示两个对象之间的相似性。
表达效果把抽象判断转化为具体形象,帮助读者迅速把握特征。
Metonymy · 借代
原文落点minds
判定与构成以思维器官代知识分子或思想。
表达效果用高度凝练的关联名称压缩复杂社会背景。
Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比
原文落点As the critic Leo Marx reminds us, “Anyone familiar with the work of the classic American writer (I am thinking of men like Cooper, Emerson, Thoreau, Melville, Whitman, and Mark Tw…
判定与构成多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。
表达效果累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。
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本段完整参考译文不幸的是,这种文学传统并不足以使我们免于生态灾难。毕竟,美国的每个技师、工业家、农业家或者官员,这些对 环境问题采取容忍态度或者参与破坏环境的人,起码都读过一点爱默生、棱罗、梅尔维尔、惠特曼以及马克·吐温的作 品。他们中间的许多人还是野营者、观鸟者,或者热衷捕鱼的人,因此在某种程度上,他们对生态科学要阐释的自然有切 身的认识。尽管如此,他们中的多数人依然对环境危机感到惊异,毫无思想准备。显然他们没有认识到梭罗热爱的树林、 马克·吐温笔下的河流、梅尔维尔描写的海洋正遭受(人类的)侵犯。
段落完整解析

段落主旨与篇章作用

主旨:不幸的是,这种文学传统并不足以使我们免于生态灾难。

作用:承接前文继续发展中心话题,通过事实、描写、解释或评价补充新的论证层次。

行文结构与逻辑

先写“不幸的是,这种文学传统并不足以使我们免于生态灾难。”;中部推进到“他们中间的许多人还是野营者、观鸟者,或者热衷捕鱼的人,因此在某种程度上,他们对生态科学要阐释的自然有切 身的认识。”;最后落在“显然他们没有认识到梭罗热爱的树林、 马克·吐温笔下的河流、梅尔维尔描写的海洋正遭受(人类的)侵犯。”,构成起点—展开—落点的层次。

主要关系:因果、转折/对照、时间/次序、并列/递进

核心句法

After all, every American technician, industrialist, agriculturist, or public official who has condoned or participated in the assault on the environment has read at least some of Cooper, Emerson, Thoreau, Melville, Whitman, and Mark Twain.

句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 who,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;含从属连词 after,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;多重逗号成分构成长句,注意并列项、插入语与主谓主干的边界。

  • 关系或连接标记为 who;应逐一确认先行词,避免把定语从句误作新的主句。
  • 从属标记为 after;它们分别组织让步、原因、时间、条件或选择关系。
  • 本句包含多层逗号成分;括出插入语和并列项后,剩余部分即为主要主谓骨架。

词汇与短语

  • avid/ˈævəd/劲头十足的,热衷的
  • elucidate/ɪˈlusəˌdeɪt/阐明,解释

修辞手法、原文证据与效果

  • Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比After all, every American technician, industrialist, agriculturist, or public official who has condoned or participated in the assault on the environment has read at least some of …多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。
  • Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞all使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。
  • Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比Nevertheless, most of them were taken unawares by the environmental crisis, failing to understand, apparently, that Thoreau’s woods, Mark Twain’s rivers, and Melville’s oceans are …多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。

翻译与理解难点

  • 长句先找限定谓语,再把定语从句、状语、同位语和插入语逐层拆开;中文可按逻辑顺序分译。
  • 代词和关系词必须回指到明确对象;先确认先行词,再决定中文是否需要补出名词。
  • 被动结构应根据中文习惯处理为主动、无主句或“被”字句,重点保留施受关系。

Sentence 13.1Unfortunately, this literary heritage has not been enough to save us from ecological disaster.

对应译文不幸的是,这种文学传统并不足以使我们免于生态灾难。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点Unfortunately, this literary heritage has not been enough to save us from ecological disaster.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 13.2After all, every American technician, industrialist, agriculturist, or public official who has condoned or participated in the assault on the environment has read at least some of Cooper, Emerson, Thoreau, Melville, Whitman, and Mark Twain.

对应译文毕竟,美国的每个技师、工业家、农业家或者官员,这些对 环境问题采取容忍态度或者参与破坏环境的人,起码都读过一点爱默生、棱罗、梅尔维尔、惠特曼以及马克·吐温的作 品。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 who,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;含从属连词 after,构成时间、原因、让步、条件或比较状语;多重逗号成分构成长句,注意并列项、插入语与主谓主干的边界。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比
原文落点After all, every American technician, industrialist, agriculturist, or public official who has condoned or participated in the assault on the environment has read at least some of …
判定与构成多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。
表达效果累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。
Hyperbole / Absolute Diction · 夸张/绝对化措辞
原文落点all
判定与构成使用全称、极端范围或绝对数量词扩大表达程度。
表达效果强化作者情绪和判断力度;理解时需结合上下文而非机械按字面取值。

Sentence 13.3Many of them are campers, birdwatchers, or avid fishermen, and therefore to some degree personally aware of the natural processes that the science of ecology hopes to elucidate.

对应译文他们中间的许多人还是野营者、观鸟者,或者热衷捕鱼的人,因此在某种程度上,他们对生态科学要阐释的自然有切 身的认识。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
avid/ˈævəd/劲头十足的,热衷的elucidate/ɪˈlusəˌdeɪt/阐明,解释
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点Many of them are campers, birdwatchers, or avid fishermen, and therefore to some degree personally aware of the natural processes …
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 13.4Nevertheless, most of them were taken unawares by the environmental crisis, failing to understand, apparently, that Thoreau’s woods, Mark Twain’s rivers, and Melville’s oceans are today under attack.

对应译文尽管如此,他们中的多数人依然对环境危机感到惊异,毫无思想准备。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。句首限制/程度成分造成倒装或强调语序;含关系或连接成分 that,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句;出现 be + 过去分词形式,应结合语义判断被动语态或分词形容词;逗号后有现在分词/完成分词短语,通常作伴随、原因或结果状语;多重逗号成分构成长句,注意并列项、插入语与主谓主干的边界。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比
原文落点Nevertheless, most of them were taken unawares by the environmental crisis, failing to understand, apparently, that Thoreau’s woods, Mark Twain’s rivers, and Melville’s oceans are …
判定与构成多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。
表达效果累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。
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本段完整参考译文因污染而变得越来越浓的烟气有助于我们认识到这一点。如利奥·马克斯所说,“从某种意义上讲,当今的环境危机为 这种富于想象力的理念(即人与自然和谐的必要性)提供了一种确切、可以量化的基础。”我们努力证明,通过人类和自 然界进行有意识的接触得出的这些简单的概括性结论在生态科学的事实和理论原则方面是具有可靠基础的,这一点可能就 是这一努力的主要价值。因此,这些简单的概括性结论与科学结合就成为修补环境危机给自然造成的破坏的工具。 (选自《封闭的循环——自然、人和技术》)
段落完整解析

段落主旨与篇章作用

主旨:因污染而变得越来越浓的烟气有助于我们认识到这一点。

作用:收束全文:回应前文的中心问题,把局部叙述或论证提升为结论、余韵或主题判断。

行文结构与逻辑

先写“因污染而变得越来越浓的烟气有助于我们认识到这一点。”;中部推进到“如利奥·马克斯所说,“从某种意义上讲,当今的环境危机为 这种富于想象力的理念(即人与自然和谐的必要性)提供了一种确切、可以量……”;最后落在“因此,这些简单的概括性结论与科学结合就成为修补环境危机给自然造成的破坏的工具。 (选自《封闭的循环——自然、人和技术》)”,构成起点—展开—落点的层次。

主要关系:因果、并列/递进

核心句法

This is perhaps the major value of the effort to show that the simple generalizations which have already emerged from perceptive human contact with the natural world have a valid base in the facts and principles of a science, ecology.

句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that, which,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。

  • 关系或连接标记为 that、which;应逐一确认先行词,避免把定语从句误作新的主句。

词汇与短语

  • miasma/miˈæzmə/有害的影响,不良感觉

修辞手法、原文证据与效果

  • Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比For, in Leo Marx’s words, “The current environmental crisis has in a sense put a literal, factual, often quantifiable base under this poetic idea [i.e., the need for human harmony …多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。

翻译与理解难点

  • 长句先找限定谓语,再把定语从句、状语、同位语和插入语逐层拆开;中文可按逻辑顺序分译。
  • 代词和关系词必须回指到明确对象;先确认先行词,再决定中文是否需要补出名词。

Sentence 14.1The rising miasma of pollution has helped us to achieve this understanding.

对应译文因污染而变得越来越浓的烟气有助于我们认识到这一点。
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
miasma/miˈæzmə/有害的影响,不良感觉
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点The rising miasma of pollution has helped us to achieve this understanding.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 14.2For, in Leo Marx’s words, “The current environmental crisis has in a sense put a literal, factual, often quantifiable base under this poetic idea [i.e., the need for human harmony with nature].”

对应译文因污染而变得越来越浓的烟气有助于我们认识到这一点。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。有过去分词短语,通常表示被动或完成并作后置修饰/状语;多重逗号成分构成长句,注意并列项、插入语与主谓主干的边界。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Enumeration / Parallelism · 列举/排比
原文落点For, in Leo Marx’s words, “The current environmental crisis has in a sense put a literal, factual, often quantifiable base under this poetic idea [i.e., the need for human harmony …
判定与构成多个同类词组、分句或结构连续排列。
表达效果累积细节、加强节奏,并使论证或描写更有气势。

Sentence 14.3This is perhaps the major value of the effort to show that the simple generalizations which have already emerged from perceptive human contact with the natural world have a valid base in the facts and principles of a science, ecology.

对应译文如利奥·马克斯所说,“从某种意义上讲,当今的环境危机为 这种富于想象力的理念(即人与自然和谐的必要性)提供了一种确切、可以量化的基础。”我们努力证明,通过人类和自 然界进行有意识的接触得出的这些简单的概括性结论在生态科学的事实和理论原则方面是具有可靠基础的,这一点可能就 是这一努力的主要价值。
语法解析句型:复合句/复杂句。含关系或连接成分 that, which,需结合先行词辨认定语从句/名词从句。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点This is perhaps the major value of the effort to show that the simple generalizations which have already emerged from perceptive h…
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

Sentence 14.4Thus linked to science, these ideas become tools for restoring the damage inflicted on nature by the environmental crisis.

对应译文因此,这些简单的概括性结论与科学结合就成为修补环境危机给自然造成的破坏的工具。 (选自《封闭的循环——自然、人和技术》)
语法解析句型:简单句或并列句。以直接陈述为主;先确认主语、限定谓语和宾语/表语,再处理介词短语。
本句未命中本单元指定词表;可在下方完整词汇表继续查阅。
修辞:证据—构成—效果
Plain Exposition · 平实说明
原文落点Thus linked to science, these ideas become tools for restoring the damage inflicted on nature by the environmental crisis.
判定与构成本句以叙述、说明或论证推进为主,未见足以单列的常见修辞格。
表达效果直接提供事实或逻辑连接,为相邻修辞性句子建立清晰语境。

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1. In my experience this principle is likely to encounter considerable resistance:encounter表示“经历,遭遇”。例:The government has encountered strong resistance to its plans to raise income tax.政府欲提高所得税的方案遭到了强烈的反对。

2. ...affording in each case the opportunity to try out the suitability of some random genetic change: try out表示“试用,试验,检 验”。例:I’m trying out a new computer.我在试用一台新电脑。

3. ...those possible arrangements that are not compatible with the whole are screened out over the long course of evolution:screen out表示“剔除,清除(不可接受者或不合适者)”。例:An answering service can screen out nuisance calls.自动应答服务可以 挡掉骚扰电话.

4. In effect, no organic substance is synthesized unless there is provision for its degradation:in effect表示“事实上,实际上”。 例:Even though she is, in effect, his stepmother, he fathers a child with her.实际上,尽管她(藤壶)是自己的继母,他(源 氏)还是与她生育了一位孩子。

5. ...he ordered his advisers, on pain of death, to produce a set of volumes:on pain of death表示“违者处死,以死为代价”。例: He was told to leave the country on pain of death.他被勒令离境,违则处死。

6. The story goes on in this vein, as such stories will, until the advisers are required:in vein表示“(说话,写作)以……的风 格”。例:There was more humour, in much the same vein.风格差不多,只是更幽默了。

7. ...the final generalizations which emerge from all this:emerge from表示“浮现,出现”。例:The sun emerged from behind the clouds.太阳从云层后露了出来。

8. ... these ideas become tools for restoring the damage inflicted on nature:inflict on表示“使(某人)遭受(不愉快的事),使 承受”。例:The strikes inflicted serious damage on the economy.罢工给经济造成了巨大的损失。

9. Walt Whitman(沃尔特·惠特曼)

Walt Whitman (1819—1892) is American poet, journalist, and essayist. His verse collection Leaves of Grass (1855) is considered landmark in the history of American literature. As a humanist, he incorporates both views of transcendentalism and realism in his works. Whitman is often called the father of free verse.

10. Moby Dick(《白鲸》)

Herman Melville (1819—1891), American novelist, short-story writer, and poet, is best known for his novels of the sea, including his masterpiece Moby Dick (1851). Moby Dick is considered to be one of the greatest American novels. The story tells the adventures and voyage of an outcast, Ishmael, on the whaleship Pequod commanded by Captain Ahab. Ahab’s only purpose of this voyage is to seek revenge to the ferocious whale Moby Dick which bit off his leg. This novel is also famous for its stunning opening: “Call me Ishmael.”

11. Ralph Waldo Emerson(爱默生)

Ralph Waldo Emerson (1803—1882) was an American poet, essayist, and philosopher. After his marriage he settled in Concord, Massachusetts. The center of a literary circle, Emerson became the chief spokesman for Transcendentalism. Among Emerson’s best works are First and Second Series, Poems, Representative Men, The Conduct of Life and English Traits. His best known addresses are “The American Scholar” and “The Divinity School Address”. Emerson’s beliefs—that each man shares in the Over-Soul, or God; that Nature is a manifestation of Spirit; and that man possesses, within himself, the means to all knowledge—expressed in his memorable sentences, are of central importance in the history of American culture.

12. Henry David Thoreau (梭罗)

Henry David Thoreau (1817-1862) was an American essayist, naturalist, and poet. Born at Concord, and educated at Harvard,

Thoreau began his career as a teacher. Through his friend and neighbor, Emerson, he became a part of the Transcendentalist circle. In 1845 Thoreau built a cabin at Walden Pond, and lived there for more than two years. The experience was later described in his best-known work, Walden. Politically the most conscious of the Transcendentalists, an acute observer of natural and social facts, Thoreau was also an outstanding prose stylist.

文体与修辞总解

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1. 文体

本文是一篇说明文,主要讲述了剩下的两个生态定律。第三条定律是“自然界最加博学”,第四条定律是“世界上没有免费 午餐”。通过进一步介绍自然界的规律和法则,作者揭示了生态系统中万物相互依存、共生共亡的本质。

2. 修辞

本文涉及的修辞手法主要有metaphor(隐喻)等,这在前面的单元已经提到,此处不再赘述。

常见修辞区分

手法核心差异判定方法
Metaphor 隐喻 / Simile 明喻隐喻直接等同,明喻用 like、as 等标记相似。先找比较标记;有标记通常是明喻,无标记再判断是否跨概念映射。
Metaphor 隐喻 / Personification 拟人拟人是把人的动作、感官或意志赋给非人对象。只有出现人的能力时才判拟人;一般形象替换判隐喻。
Metonymy 借代 / Synecdoche 提喻借代依赖一般关联;提喻必须是部分与整体关系。地点代机构是借代,mind/hand 等身体部分代人常是提喻。
Transferred Epithet 移就 / Personification 拟人移就是形容词的逻辑修饰对象发生转移;拟人是主语获得人的属性。追问形容词本来应该形容谁;若只是修饰错位而无人的动作,就是移就。
Parallelism 排比 / Antithesis 对照排比要求结构相近;对照还要求意义方向相反。相同结构可以只是累积;出现 but、while、more/less 等反向意义时可能兼有对照。
Irony 反讽 / Paradox 隽语式矛盾反讽存在字面与真实态度反差;悖论表面矛盾但逻辑可成立。判断作者是否在嘲讽字面说法;若重点是揭示复杂真理,则更接近悖论。
Hyperbole 夸张 / Litotes 曲言夸张扩大程度;曲言用否定或弱化表达强意。all/never/endless 常提示夸张;far from/not uncommon 等常提示曲言。
Enumeration 列举 / Climax 层进列举只堆叠项目;层进要求强度、范围或情绪逐步增强。检查能否任意调换顺序;若换序破坏递进,才是层进。
Antonomasia 换称 / Metonymy 借代换称多用固定别名、头衔或典型专名替代对象;借代只需一般关联。Big Apple 代纽约是换称;Wall Street 代金融界通常判借代。
Euphemism 委婉语 / Understatement 低调陈述委婉语回避禁忌、粗鲁或尴尬说法;低调陈述则有意减弱任何程度。先问是否存在被社会习惯回避的直白词;若没有,只是缩小程度,则偏向低调陈述。
Ellipsis 省略 / Fragment 句子残缺修辞性省略依靠上下文仍能恢复成分;错误残句则缺乏可恢复依据。补回省去的主语、谓语或重复结构后语义完整,才可判为 ellipsis。
Symbolism 象征 / Metaphor 隐喻隐喻通常作用于局部表达;象征意象会跨段或贯穿全文反复承载主题。一次性的形象替换多为隐喻;反复出现并与人物命运、主题对应的 loons 属于象征。
Analogy 类比 / Simile 明喻明喻通常比较一个形象特征;类比会让两套关系或系统在较长论证中对应。一句 like 比较常是明喻;用钟表系统解释生态系统则是类比。
Rhetorical Question 反问/设问 / Genuine Question 真问修辞问句用于强调或引出论点;真问以取得未知信息为目的。看上下文是否立即自答、答案是否显然,以及说话人是否真的等待信息。
Repetition 反复 / Anaphora 首语反复反复可出现在任何位置;首语反复要求连续分句或句子用同一开头。只有重复位于多个结构的起首位置时,才进一步判为 anaphora。
Alliteration 头韵 / Assonance 元音韵头韵重复词首辅音;元音韵重复重读元音。按声音而非拼写判断;前者看开头辅音,后者看词内部重读元音。
Allusion 用典 / Quotation 引语用典只需唤起熟知人物或故事,不一定逐字引用;引语明确保存他人原话。出现 Faust、Paradise Lost 等文化专名多为用典;带出处的原句则还可同时构成引语。

完整词汇与美式 IPA

pervasive /pɚˈveɪsɪv/

到处存在的,到处弥漫着的

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pervasive [pE:5veisiv] adj. existing everywhere到处存在的,到处弥漫着的:The fact that so many people have posted comments on this topic shows how pervasive and complicated it is.事实上这么多人公开谈论这个话题,就已经表明这是多么普 遍多么复杂的事情。

detrimental /ˌdɛtrəˈmɛntəl/

有害的,不利的

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detrimental [7detri5mentl] adj. causing harm or damage有害的,不利的:The policy will be detrimental to the peace process. 这项政策不利于和平进程。

analogy /əˈnælədʒi/

类似处,相似处

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analogy [E5nAlEdVi] n. something that seems similar between two situations, processes, etc.类似处,相似处

finite /ˈfaɪˌnaɪt/

有限的,有限度的

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finite [5fainait] adj. having an end or a limit 有限的,有限度的:Human knowledge is finite, ie there are things we do not know. 人类的认识是有限的。

improbable /ˌɪˈmprɑbəbəl/

不大可能发生的,未必确切的

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improbable [im5prCbEbl] adj. not likely to happen or to be true 不大可能发生的,未必确切的:As improbable as this sounds, it really works.听起来有点不可思议,但这是真的。

self-evident /ˈsɛlf ˌɛvədənt/

不证自明的,显而易见的

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self-evident [5self5evidEnt] adj. clearly true and needing no more proof不证自明的,显而易见的:It seems to me self-evident that police searches of newspaper offices burden the freedom of the press.警察对报社的搜查给新闻自由造成压力,这在我看来 是不言而喻的。

technologist /ˌtɛˈknɑlədʒɪst/

技术专家,工艺师

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technologist [tek5nClEdVist] n. someone who has special knowledge of technology 技术专家,工艺师:How is one to maintain one’s knowledge and ability as an educational technologist?作为教育技术专家,我们应该如何维持我们的专业知识和能力?

predecessor /ˈprɛdəˌsɛsɚ/

前任

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predecessor [5pri:disesE] n. someone who had your job before you start doing it 前任:There is some truth to this, and I certainly hope that President Obama will be far more engaged than his predecessor in tackling this agenda.关于这一点,确实有些 属实,我当然希望奥巴马总统在解决这个议程上将远比他前任参与得多。

retain /rɪˈteɪn/

保留,保有,继续拥有

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retain [ri5tein] v. to keep something or continue to have something保留,保有,继续拥有:His speech could not retain the interest of his audience.他的讲话不能保持住听众的兴趣。

induce /ˌɪˈndus/

诱发(某种身体反应)

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induce [in5dju:s] vt. to cause a particular physical condition诱发(某种身体反应):Videos of neutral content, such as landscapes, induce no such response.风景画这样平和的内容便不会引起这样的反应。

x-irradiation X射线照射exposure to X-rays /ˈɛks ˌɪˌreɪdiˌeɪʃən ˌɛks ɪˌkspoʊʒɚ ˌtu ˌɛks ˌreɪz/

射线照射exposure to X-rays

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x-irradiation X射线照射exposure to X-rays

mutation /mjuˈteɪʃən/

动物或植物的)突变,变异

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mutation [mju(:)5teiFEn] n. a change in the genetic structure of an animal or plant that makes it different from others of the same kind (动物或植物的)突变,变异:This mutation makes no difference to animals that get plenty of vitamin C in their diet. 这种突变对有些从饮食中获得充足维生素C的动物没有任何影响。

albeit /ɔˈlbiɪt/

尽管,虽然

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albeit [C:l5bi:It] conj. used to add information that reduces the force or importance of what you have just said 尽管,虽然: Albeit fair, the girl was not sought after.那姑娘虽然漂亮,但不是被爱慕的女子。

viability /vaɪəˈbɪləti/

成活力,生存能力

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viability [7vaiE5biliti] n. being able to continue to live or to develop into a living thing 成活力,生存能力:It evaluates the basic viability of the project.它估计了项目的基本生存能力。

compound /ˈkɑmpaʊnd/

化合物

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compound [5kCmpaund] n. technical a substance containing atoms from two or more elements化合物

variant /ˈvɛriənt/

变体,变化形式

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variant [5vZEriEnt] n. technical something that is slightly different from the usual form of something变体,变化形式:I recommend that you avoid this variant because it makes assumptions about interrupt states.我建议不要使用此变体,因为它会假 设中断状态。

foregoing /fɔˈrɡoʊɪŋ/

刚提到的(事物)前面提到的事

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foregoing [fC:5^EuiN] adj. something that has just been mentioned, read, dealt with, etc.刚提到的(事物)前面提到的事 物,上述(事物):The foregoing story was written by an English writer.前述的故事是一个英国作家写的。

synthesize /ˈsɪnθəˌsaɪz/

合成

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synthesize [5sinWisaiz] v. to make something by combining different things or substances 合成:It helps to synthesize proteins, build our muscles, and maintain the normal electrical activity of the heart.它帮助合成蛋白质,充盈我们的肌肉,维持心脏正常 的生物电活动。

carcinogenic /ˌkɑrsənoʊˈdʒɛnɪk/

会致癌的

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carcinogenic [kB:sInE5dVEnIk] adj. likely to cause cancer 会致癌的

enzyme /ˈɛˌnzaɪm/

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enzyme [5enzaIm] n. [C] a chemical substance that is produced in a plant or animal, and helps chemical changes to take place in the plant or animal 酶

provision /prəˈvɪʒən/

提 供,供给,为……作好准备,为……预先釆取措施

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provision [prE5viVEn] n. [C] [usually singular, U] when you provide something that someone needs now or in the future 提 供,供给,为……作好准备,为……预先釆取措施:The main business of the port is to provision passing ocean liners.这个港口 的主要工作是为过往的远洋油轮提供物品。

prudent /ˈprudənt/

明智谨慎的,慎重的,审慎的

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prudent [5pru:dEnt] adj. sensible and careful, especially by trying to avoid unnecessary risks 明智谨慎的,慎重的,审慎的: Be modest and prudent, never lag behind!谦虚谨慎,永不落后!

disseminate /dɪˈsɛməˌneɪt/

散布,广泛传播(消息或观 点): “All volunteers become empowered to be an expert in their area of training and can disseminate infor…

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disseminate [di5semineit] vt. formal to spread information or ideas to as many people as possible散布,广泛传播(消息或观 点): “All volunteers become empowered to be an expert in their area of training and can disseminate information to the public,” she said.“所有志愿者只要在他们受训领域被授予专家认证,就能向公众传播知识”,她在采访中表示。

detergent /dɪˈtɝdʒənt/

洗涤剂,洗衣粉,洗洁精

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detergent [di5tE:dVEnt] n. a liquid or powder used for washing clothes, dishes, etc.洗涤剂,洗衣粉,洗洁精

insecticide /ˌɪˈnsɛktəˌsaɪd/

杀虫剂,杀虫药

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insecticide [in5sektisaid] n. a chemical substance used for killing insects 杀虫剂,杀虫药

herbicide /ˈhɝbɪˌsaɪd/

除草剂

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herbicide [5hE:bisaid] n. technical a substance used to kill unwanted plants除草剂

illuminating /ˌɪˈluməˌneɪtɪŋ/

使清楚易懂的,富于启发性的

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illuminating [i5lju:mi7neitiN] adj. making things much clearer and easier to understand使清楚易懂的,富于启发性的:I continued to eat my delicious stir-fries and curries, but I did it alone, surreptitiously, the light from the refrigerator—the only thing illuminating me in my quiet, now-herbivorous kitchen.我继续吃我的美味炒菜和咖喱,但我暗中独自进行着,在安静的而现在 满是草食的厨房里,照亮我的只有冰箱里的光。

potentate /ˈpoʊtəˌnteɪt/

君主,统治者

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potentate [5pEutEnteit] n. a ruler in the past, who had great power over his people君主,统治者:It is scarcely possible to exaggerate the influence of vanity throughout the range of human life, from the child of three to the potentate at whose frown the world trembles. 从三岁的小孩到眉头一皱世界震动的君主,对人类虚荣心遍及生活各角落的影响,如何夸大都不为过。

tome /ˈtoʊm/

大部头书,厚本书

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tome [tEum] n. literary a large heavy book大部头书,厚本书:Open that old tome from the bookshelf over the fireplace, stick your nose in its pages and smell the ink, the glue and the immortality of the printed words.在火炉上方的架子上,您可以看到那本 大书。翻开这本大书,将鼻子贴近书面,您可以闻到墨香,书胶,还有文字的古老气息。

enmeshed /ɛˈnmɛʃt/

陷入的,卷入的

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enmeshed [in5meFd] adj. very involved in an unpleasant or complicated situation 陷入的,卷入的:It would expose China to the charge of becoming enmeshed in European politics.这将使中国参与陷入危机的欧洲政治。

incisive /ˌɪˈnsaɪsɪv/

尖锐的,切中要害的

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incisive [in5saisiv] adj. showing intelligence and a clear understanding of something 尖锐的,切中要害的:In an ideal world, everyone responsible for deciding who gets hired would indeed be well versed on your qualifications and ready to ask thoughtful, incisive questions.在理想的世界中,那些决定录用谁的人会很清楚你具备的条件,而且会问你很详尽且尖锐的问题。

condone /kəˈndoʊn/

宽恕,原谅(大多数人认为 不 道德的行为)

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condone [kEn5dEun] v. to accept or forgive behaviour that most people think is morally wrong 宽恕,原谅(大多数人认为 不 道德的行为):To understand these motives is not to condone them.了解这些动机是为了不宽恕他们。

avid /ˈævəd/

劲头十足的,热衷的

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avid [5Avid] adj. doing something as much as possible 劲头十足的,热衷的:He had become an avid and accomplished gardener in France.他在法国成为了一个热心的精湛的园丁。

elucidate /ɪˈlusəˌdeɪt/

阐明,解释

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elucidate [i5lju:sideit] vt. to explain something that is difficult to understand by providing more information阐明,解释:The pathway could also elucidate how language evolved.该路径还可以说明语言是如何进化的。

miasma /miˈæzmə/

有害的影响,不良感觉

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miasma [mI5AzmE] n. an evil influence or feeling that seems to surround a person or place 有害的影响,不良感觉

inflict /ˌɪˈnflɪkt/

使(某人)遭受(不愉快的事),使承受

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inflict [in5flikt] v. to make someone suffer something unpleasant 使(某人)遭受(不愉快的事),使承受:This is all wrong, and not just because in so doing the Chinese would inflict large losses on themselves.这种观点是错误的,原因不仅仅是这 样做中国人会造成自身的巨大损失。

even-numbered /ˈivɪn ˌnʌmbɚd/

偶数编号的

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教材正文补充复合词:even-numbered;偶数编号的。

man-made /ˈmæn ˌmeɪd/

人造的

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教材正文补充复合词:man-made;人造的。

odd-numbered /ˈɑd ˌnʌmbɚd/

奇数编号的

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教材正文补充复合词:odd-numbered;奇数编号的。

oil-rich /ˈɔɪl ˌrɪtʃ/

石油丰富的

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教材正文补充复合词:oil-rich;石油丰富的。

over-all /ˈoʊvɚ ˌɔl/

总体的;全面的

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教材正文补充复合词:over-all;总体的;全面的。

watch-making /ˈwɑtʃ ˌmeɪkɪŋ/

钟表制造

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教材正文补充复合词:watch-making;钟表制造。

x-rays /ˈɛks ˌreɪz/

X射线(复数)

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教材正文补充复合词:x-rays;X射线(复数)。

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教材习题
Exercises

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I. Oral Presentation

Make a five-minute presentation in class based on your research.

Suggested topics:

1. Choose one of the four laws and explain it with your own examples.

2. How can the understanding of the four laws help to raise our awareness of the

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IL. Questions

environmental protection?

A. Questions on the Content

1.

What is the third law of ecology? Why does the writer say it might encounter considerable resistance?

. What does the term “research and development” (R & D) mean? What role does it

play in developing the best watches?

. What does the writer mean when saying, “In effect there are some two to three

billion years of ‘R & D’ behind every living thing.”? How has “R & D” been carried on in nature?

What does the third law suggest about the artificial introduction of an organic compound that does not occur in nature?

5. What is the function of an enzyme?

6. Why does the writer argue that “all man-made organic compounds that are at all

active biologically ought to be treated as we do drugs”?

7. What is the fourth law of ecology?

8. Why does the writer regard it embarrassing that the final law has been “widely held

by many people without any scientific analysis or professional authorization”? How do the four laws become tools for restoring the damage caused by the

environmental crisis?

. Questions on Structure and Style

What method does the writer use to explain the third law of ecology? Do you find it effective? Why or why not?

What example does the writer use in explaining the fact that the varieties of chemical substances actually found in living things are vastly more restricted than

the possible varieties?

3. Why does the writer tell a story about an oil-rich potentate in Paragraph 9?

4. Why does the writer mention major writers’ names such as Cooper, Emerson, Thoreau, Melville, Whitman, and Mark Twain? What literary heritage do they represent?

5. How does the writer end this piece? Do you think it is an effective ending? Give your reasons.

III. Paraphrase

Explain the following sentences in your own words, bringing out any implied meanings.

1. In my experience this principle is likely to encounter considerable resistance, for it appears to contradict a deeply held idea about the unique competence of human beings. (Para. 1)

2. This is a rather extreme claim; nevertheless I believe it has a good deal of merit if understood in a properly defined context. (Para. 1)

3. What is significant, for our purpose, is the universal observation that when mutation frequency is enhanced by x-rays or other means, nearly all the mutations are harmful to the organisms and the great majority so damaging as to kill the organism before it is fully formed. (Para. 3)

4. In effect there are some two to three billion years of “R & D” behind every living thing. (Para. 4)

5. Thus, when a new man-made organic substance is synthesized with a molecular structure that departs significantly from the types which occur in nature, it is probable that no degradative enzyme exists, and the material tends to accumulate. (Para. 7)

6. Such caution or prudence is, of course, impossible when billions of pounds of the substance are produced and broadly disseminated into the ecosystem where it can reach and affect numerous organisms not under our observation. (Para. 8)

7. Nevertheless, it is difficult to ignore the embarrassing fact that the final generalizations which emerge from all this—the four laws of ecology—are ideas that have been widely held by many people without any scientific analysis or professional authorization. (Para. 12)

8. Mark Twain is not only a marvelous source of wisdom about the nature of the environment of the United States from the Mississippi westward, but also a rather incisive critic of the irrelevance of science which loses connection to the realities of life. (Para. 12)

IV. Practice with Words and Expressions

A. Look up the dictionary and explain the meaning of the italicized words and phrases. 1. ...poke a pencil into the exposed works. (Para. 2) 2. ...that are not compatible with the over-all operation of the system... (Para. 2) 3. There is a close, and very meaningful, analogy in biological systems. (Para. 3)

4. ...by treating it with an agent... (Para. 3) 5. ...arrangements that are not compatible with the whole are screened out... (Para. 4) 6. ...the latter have once been tried out and found wanting. (Para. 6) 7. ...he ordered his advisers, on pain of death, to produce a set of volumes... (Para. 9) 8. When the tomes arrived... (Para. 9) 9. The story goes on in this vein... (Para. 9)

10. Many of them are campers... (Para. 13)

B. Replace the italicized formal, or technical words and terms with everyday words and expressions. 1. One of the most pervasive features of modern technology is the notion that it is intended to “improve on nature”... (Para. 1) 2. ...any major man-made change in a natural system is likely to be detrimental to that system. (Para. 1) 3. Generally, exposure to x-rays increases the frequency of all mutations which have been observed... (Para. 3) 4. If the change damages the viability of the organism, it is likely to kill it before the change can be passed on to future generations. (Para. 4) 5. Living things are composed of many thousands of different organic compounds... (Para. 5) 6. And on the basis of the foregoing, one would reason that many of these possible protein types were once formed in some particular living things... (Para. 6) 7. In the same way, living cells synthesize fatty acids...with even-numbered carbon chain lengths... (Para. 6) 8. ...when billions of pounds of the substance are produced and broadly disseminated into the ecosystem... (Para. 8) 9. The complex web in which all life is enmeshed, and man’s place in it... (Para. 12) 10. ...but also a rather incisive critic of the irrelevance of science which loses connection to the realities of life. (Para. 12)

C. Give the Chinese equivalents of the following terms. organic chemistry (Para. 5)

organic compound (Para. 5)

protein (Para. 6)

synthesize (Para. 6)

fatty acid (Para. 6)

carbon chain (Para. 6)

oxygen atom (Para. 6)

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carcinogenic (Para. 6)

9. enzyme (Para. 7) 10. detergent (Para. 8) 11. insecticide (Para. 8) 12. herbicide (Para. 8)

D. Differentiate between the following pairs of words. 1. impossible and improbable

2. technician and technologist

3. economics and economy

4. obviously and apparently

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A. Translate the following sentences into Chinese.

1. Stated baldly, the third law of ecology holds that any major man-made change in a natural system is likely to be detrimental to that system. (Para. 1)

2. In effect, the watch mechanism, as it now exists, represents a very restricted selection, from among an enormous variety of possible arrangements of component parts, of a singular organization of the watch works. (Para. 2)

3. Thus, the structure of a present living thing or the organization of a current natural ecosystem is likely to be “best” in the sense that it has been so heavily screened for disadvantageous components that any new one is very likely to be worse than the present ones. (Para. 4)

4. The third law of ecology suggests that the artificial introduction of an organic compound that does not occur in nature, but is man-made and is nevertheless active in a living system, is very likely to be harmful. (Para. 5)

5. One of the striking facts about the chemistry of living systems is that for every organic substance produced by a living organism, there exists, somewhere in nature, an enzyme capable of breaking that substance down. (Para. 7)

6. In my experience, this idea has proven so illuminating for environmental problems that I have borrowed it from its original source, economics. (Para. 9)

7. Nevertheless, most of them were taken unawares by the environmental crisis, failing to understand, apparently, that Thoreau’s woods, Mark Twain’s rivers, and Melville’s oceans are today under attack. (Para. 13)

8. This is perhaps the major value of the effort to show that the simple generalizations which have already emerged from perceptive human contact with the natural world have a valid base in the facts and principles of a science, ecology. (Para. 14)

B. Translate Paragraphs 8 and 10 into Chinese.

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Read, Think and Comment

Below is a passage from an article about Steve Jobs by Krystal D’Costa published in Scientific American. Read it and prepare to respond to the following questions: How does the author begin the article? Why does she begin this way? What is the function of Paragraph 2? What are the main ideas of the last two paragraphs? Why does the author say “Jobs had a Promethean quality to him”?

Like others, | learned of Jobs’ passing on an Apple device. S and | were just on our way out the door to pick up dinner when | hit the Facebook app on my iPhone. One of the updates near the top of my feed was from a friend in the tech sector and it read: “I had a feeling Jobs was in pretty bad shape when he stepped down from Apple.” Instantly, | went into search mode. Hungry for more information, | hit the home button and selected the Twitter app knowing that the people | follow would have shared relevant links and information about this event. Before my eyes | watched as my stream filled with @ RIPSteveJobs tweets. | told S—he went to get his iPhone. We looked at each other. Like so many others, particularly of our generation, we have been shaped by Apple and their products. My first experience on a computer was via Apple. We played Oregon Trail and Where in the World is Carmen Sandiego? on Apple computers when we were in elementary school. In fact, that was probably the beginning of my love of video games—Sim City, The Sims, Diablo, and American McGee’s Alice remain some of my favorites and they were played on a Mac. Part of S's career has grown from his familiarity with Apple products. | was mostly speechless as | tracked the responses, numbly reading Tweets aloud to S while he drove. We talked about how the ubiquity of Apple has helped drive most people to the Cloud.

We definitely weren't the only ones engaged in this exercise. Over the last few days there has been no end of commentary on the death of Steve Jobs—what

he meant to people, the ways he drove innovation, the parts of him the public didn’t get to see or didn’t often discuss, and how he might have changed other areas of our lives if he’d applied himself differently. This is yet another addition to the growing documentation of his passing; it is more than just a story about what he meant to me—it covers what he meant to us all.

Jobs had a Promethean quality to him—he gave us fire, knowledge, at our fingertips, providing not just access, but new ways of interacting and understanding our lives. It’s easy to get swept up in these discussions, as | sit typing this on my old MacBook (which was the first laptop | ever purchased for myself), but larger questions loom. Jobs’ permanence extends beyond sainthood, which is only applicable via belief to a small group of people. The broad impact of Apple provides an opportunity to assess the global qualities of iCulture.

Jobs has been heralded as an innovator, and he has indeed challenged us to think differently and stretch the boundaries of digital—and then he put that world in the palm of our hands, setting a standard for access to information and apparent freedom to be ourselves. It promised that you could be who you were, that your style would fit with the device—which would be standard, but the experience, well, that was yours.
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A.

1. The third law is nature knows the best. Because the general knowledge is that human knows better and the modern technology is intended to “improve on nature.”

2. Research and development means that over the years numerous watchmakers who are all taught by their predecessors, have tried out various detailed arrangements of watch works and have discarded those that are not compatible with the overall operation of the system and retained the better features. It plays a role of a very restricted selection, in which the last chosen one best fits the system.

3. It means that the evolving process every living thing has undergone is very intricate and highly selective. It is carried on as described in the text: “In that time, a staggering number of new individual living things have been produced, affording in each case the opportunity to try out the suitability of some random genetic change. If the change damages the viability of the organism, it is likely to kill it before the change can be passed on to future generations.”

4. The organic compound is man-made and will nevertheless become active in a living system. It is very likely to be harmful to the nature.

5. An enzyme breaks down the natural substances.

6 Because these compounds have strong actions on any other organism and are likely to damage other forms of life.

7. The fourth law of ecology is that there is no such thing as a free lunch.

8. Because the interaction between human and nature widely acknowledged in literature is still not applied to environmental protection.

9. The four laws arouse scientific awareness of the environmental crisis and therefore become tools.

B.

1. Analogy. Yes, it is effective. Through comparing the evolution process to the making of watch, readers can better understand the evolution process.

2. The writers uses examples of DDT, detergents, insecticides and herbicides to explain.

3. It is to explain the concept of “there is no free lunch.”

4. These names represent understanding of the four laws from the perspective of literature. All these works exhibit the beauty of the nature and a poetic ideal of harmony between human and nature.

5. The author ends with a quotation and a promising solution. It is effective since it makes its readers reflect more on the practical effect of the four laws.

1. My experience proves that some people will strongly reject this principle for it appears to diverge from an idea firmly held by people that human beings have the unique ability and power to do anything that is needed: human beings know better than nature.

2. Most people may regard this statement unusual and unacceptable. However, I believe, it contains many good points so that it

deserves our attention if we can properly define the situation and relate it to the correspondent situation, and events, instead of considering it independent of the context.

3. What is useful for the sake of our argument is the universally observed fact that when mutation frequency is increased by x-rays or other means, almost all the mutations cause harm to the living things and the great majority of the mutations are so damaging that they kill the living thing before it is fully formed.

4. The fact is that nature has carried out research and development for about two or three billion years for the survival and development of every living thing.

5. In this way, when a new man-made organic substance is synthesized with a molecular structure that is very different from the types which are synthesized in nature, most likely no corresponding enzyme is capable of degrading this substance, and consequently the substance tends to continue to stay as a harmful element.

6. It is impossible to avoid dangers or risks caused by such man-made substances when billions of pounds of them are produced and scattered far and wide into the ecosystem. In the ecosystem, they can bring about negative impacts on numerous organisms that we do not observe in our research.

7. In spite of the fact just mentioned, we can’t ignore the fact that people who firmly believe in the four laws of ecology are not engaged in scientific study. In other words, they are actually not scientists. This fact is rather embarrassing (for scientists).

8. Mark Twain not only provided remarkable first-hand information and knowledge about the nature of the environment of the part west of the Mississippi River, but criticized directly and sharply the irrelevant aspects of science which lose connection to the realities of life.

A.

1. works: the working parts or mechanism (of a watch, a clock, etc.)

2. compatible with: that can work well together

3. close: similar

4. agent: a chemical or substance that makes other substances change

5. screen out to sift through a coarse mesh so as to separate finer from coarser parts

6. found wanting: proven to be not good enough for a particular purpose

7. on pain of death: at the risk of bringing death upon oneself

8. tome: a large heavy book

9. in this vein: in this particular style or way

10. camper: a person who vacations at a campsite

B.

1. extensively existing and spreading

2. be harmful

3. significant and basic changes

4. ability to continue to live

5. are made up of

6. the things that have been mentioned

7. produce by combining different things

8. spread

9. involved in a complicated way

10. direct and sharp

C.

1. 有机化学

2. 有机化合物

3. 蛋白质

4. 合成

5. 脂肪酸

6. 碳链

7. 氧原子

8. 致癌的

9. 酶

10. 洗涤剂

11. 杀虫剂

12. 除草剂

D.

1. impossible意为“不可能的”,强调“不会发生,不会存在”,另外,impossible还用于表示“极难应付的”;improbable意为“不 可能”,强调“不太可能,未必会发生”,也可用来表示“奇异的,荒谬的”。如:It seems improbable that they could have driven home in less than ten minutes.(他们在十分钟不到的时间就开车到家似乎不大可能。)

2. technician意为“技师,技术员”,强调“擅长某一领域的技术”,而technologist意为“技术专家”,强调“掌握某技术的专业知 识”。如:As a technologist, Mr. Jobs was different because he was not an engineer—and that was his great strength.(作为一名技 术专家,乔布斯特别在他不是一名工程师,而这也是他最大的长处。)

3. Economics意为“经济学”或“经济因素”,指跟财政、税收相关的学科或领域。Economy意为“经济”,指“社会物质生产、 流通、交换等活动”,也指国家的经济结构,如:China is a newly emerging economy.(中国是一个新兴经济体)。

4. obviously表示“显然”时,强调“基于显而易见的事实”,而apparently表示“显然”时,强调“根据所听到或看到的进行推测, 不确定是否真实”。如:I was not there, but apparently it was a good party.(我不在那儿,但是显然聚会不错。)

V. See the translation of the text.

1. The author starts with a personal experience relating to the passing of Steve Jobs, which is learnt from her iPhone. In this way the author connects herself and the reader through the same device they use in daily life.

2. Paragraph 2 is a transitional paragraph, from her own experience to the life deeds of Steve Jobs.

3. The last two paragraphs mainly focus on Jobs’ influence on us as an innovator.

4. Prometheus brings fire to human, which changes their life and civilization. In the metaphorical comparison, Jobs also brings fire to Apple technology. He changed our notion of technology.